You know...

Timing is not off when you cannot have what you want, when you want it. God is growing you up so that when he gives it to you, you are ready.

You know...
often you make me Feel uneasy
I Feel confused Feeling your words in such a way
my stomach turns, my heart pounds
and those calming, and sexy sounds...Why
do your words take me to a different place,
a place where I am happy to be...me?
I laugh, love, and share myself totally
 uncovered for you
to do
anything, and everything
to me
I understand it is not the time
and it is not right...
okay baby come on again,
do me, Please
with your words
not tonight...Again
it is not for now...So why
my love and how
 do I long for what happens when we go there into
that light...? Where it is just us two
That makes me have a sense of urgency filled
with patience to bask in your glory...us
words
Listening to you, saved Me!
you were His vessel...for me
I came crawling out of that hole
...floating on air
that comforted my soul
it came through you... my love 
that night I was filled with despair
that Light shined through you
saying you cared. I mirrored an image,

now of colors...
So how did it get twisted, and misunderstood
leaving me here missing you, your words
that sweet air, and Light from you onto me?
Questioning
myself, and my emptiness,
 with a longing
for what I felt was so right...guess I was wrong.
You know...
 

 

Reviews

[Treasure]

Girl You are truly gifted and I enjoyed this piece. It alomost reminds me of the countless times I was so caught up that in emotion and need that I thought something to be God sent. I realize that everything is allowed though so maybe those times were just to assure me that one day the TRUTH would happen to me, and it finally has.
You are very gifted. Peace

[Jemelle Williams]

Intriguing!
Takes maturity to view lifes often harsh lessons in a positive light. With change comes growth, so keep on growing Queen :)

[Jolyrose]

You really convey the brain and bodies desire versus the need to grow the hell up some first. You spin the web with your words and some could get tangled. I love your flow.

[Kim Brooksyn]

Incredible poem.
"Listening to you saved me." I love that line.

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

Loved this poem! I feel the same way, though I'm more "haunted" by words. Your passion is undeniable and you do it with an incredible class and grace! I find myself repeating these with you, but you're dope, you know it!

Listening to you, saved me
You were his vessel....for me

So passionate. You just have the words! You have them, and they're at your creative disposal. But you cherish them and you treat them so very well in your work. I'm applauding through snapping.....

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

That was a sad yet beautiful piece

[poddar kushal]

To a place where you would be you... this is the most important feeling and written very nicely. Your poetry is as lucid as can be to express your emotions.

[verano]

This is a really lovely poem. I get the feeling, as I read it, that it expresses a certain level of frustration in trying to making sense of what happens to us sometimes. Things seem to be going right, and then, all of a sudden, it falls apart. So we are led to reconsider what God may in fact have in mind for us.

[Ankhesen Mié]

Such longing...such love...you are an intense writer. I know the temptation is to say "passionate" but that's not what I'm getting here. What I feel from this poem is urgent questioning and inner turmoil. An overall very good write.

[Anima Inspired]

So how did it get twisted, and misunderstood
leaving me here missing you, your words
that sweet air, and Light from you onto me?

--Love these lines...

This was a great piece...there is a truth in your words that it completely relateable. Sadly, too many people curse the Lord for not giving them what they want, or for taking away things that they think they need, but as you so eloquently put it, things in life happen for a reason. Simple, strong, passionate...great!