find me

love is looking for me...

Find me

I hide from you

find me

standing naked in truth

find me

I wait for you

find me

I want you to.

Reviews

[Masq]

Lyrical Love, To the untrained eye this appears to be a short piece. However, when you read between the lines, it says sooo much more! This is a wonderful piece. This is exactly how I'm feeling and where I'm at in my life right now. I am waiting patiently for my other half to find me. The one who I am supposed to share the rest of my life with. My soul mate. I definately felt this one!

Wonderful write!

[Zarathustra]

wow...
amazing...
i really like this one

[Bill Grimes Jr.]

Powerful emotion packed into this brief yet poignant piece my friend......You write with passion.....an admirable gift indeed.....

Merry Christmas!

Bill :-)

[Dionysus Cain]

true , this was short but right on time, saying what u have to say without walking around it. i enjoy a blunt read, makes u understand the poets truth... very good.. very good.

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Short but sweet, it gets the point across. Nice read

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

What a sweet little write... and when you least expect it love will take you by surprise.

[Marvin Lewis Jr.]

This is very beautiful!
I've never read eight lines that were as powerful and thought-provoking as these were.
Superb write!

[Spat Queen]

This almost feels like a response to the "Real Men" by Susan piece I just read. This is interesting and playful in terms of romance. I enjoyed this.

[darkgurl]

Such a wonderful straight to the point write, I like this alot....Kim