find me

love is looking for me...

Find me

I hide from you

find me

standing naked in truth

find me

I wait for you

find me

I want you to.

Reviews

[Masq]

Lyrical Love, To the untrained eye this appears to be a short piece. However, when you read between the lines, it says sooo much more! This is a wonderful piece. This is exactly how I'm feeling and where I'm at in my life right now. I am waiting patiently for my other half to find me. The one who I am supposed to share the rest of my life with. My soul mate. I definately felt this one!

Wonderful write!

[An owl on the moon]

Such a compelling write, calling to love... beckoning to come... Beautiful and uplifting!

[bey]

few words packed with a melodic punch. good one.

[Liza]

isn't it funny - we love to play the come find me game...want to be wanted? want to be chased...i enjoyed this....thought provoking...don't run too far...let yourself be caught

[Life Calling!!!]

Short but sweet...but an honest piece of work that reached directly to the heart of the reader! This one is romantic, poignant and so so so beautiful! Love it! Great work! This one goes into my favorites! Absolutely awesome! Thanks!

God Bless!

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

Very smooth, very poised, very open-ended, very L.......

[JadedSparrow]

In all its simplicity, this piece speaks of the yearning for love that we call encounter in this life. So few words, and yet the emotion that accompanies them is awe inspiring. Well done.

JS

[~angelalala~]

i love this. it flows so smoothly. so simple, short yet powerful & full of sensuality. this is a beautiful piece.

[sheerpoetry]

sometimes you dont need alot of words to get your point across. im glad you know that because its perfect just the way it is

[runaway smile_<3]

Short but strong.
I really love the message that this sends.
It screams at you for help; at least that's what I get from it.
I really enjoyed this.