PLAY FOR ME

 

I close my eyes
to absorb your whispers
that massage me gently
like a new found lyric
over, and over again
I take you inside
and out

of me
like a new way of breathing
you give me a life worthy of being
I am filled with riches
having no wants
because your love on me
anticipates my needs
silently. I wait to hear
you not only play
your music for me
but bestow your
presence in me
wrapping my soul
in a permanent
afterglow.

Reviews

[kollaboratyve]

Oh my my my!!!!!!!!! this is so good it really is tasteful. It put me in a daze for a minute. I did not know what emotion I was feeling. I tried to resist the lure, but as I read, I got hooked. This is really lovely. If you do not mind, I would like to highly consider featuring this on the Poets Consortium. I would love to examine this with the imput of the other members. This is really nice and graceful. You pulled out the heavy artillery on this one! Great piece,lovely!!!!

[darkgurl]

This is really a beuatiful write here I liked this alot...Kim

[Dani California]

Absolutely stunning! I agree w/ Kollab .. very graceful and tastefully done. And, sensual ! Whew! lol
Love the music metaphor..

You have skill... that's apparent. I look forward to reading more of your works..

Well done!!