~Drips from May to September~

This is a coming together of the words that float in rivers of two minds. Lyrical Love (bolded), & Master Marvin Lewis Jr. Enjoy!

 

~Drips from May to September

 

Painting a dreamscape while sitting at the ocean's lips,

only within an empty notebook does this clouded mind rest

A break in the sky to finally see the light

that once shadowed my spirit, is now Leading me to my quest

Leaving behind every dark moment and its hurt, to be healed

right now,  

walking devoid of regrets,

for it is tears that beautify a smile

Warmth from the words of fire strike from your heart

ignite strength in my soul for you to calm

Inside the realms I visit, once my ears taste your beauty,

It is there I comprehend that you were fashioned by the bare hands of God

I am wet with sounds sent, to me as you

liquefy my spirit

cleanse

my every being...

then, there I will receive you

and drink...    

while gazing upon the fragrances your imagination daydreams

the manner in which your mind blossoms

 has made me afraid to blink

the quickness you feel, that will arrive

 will be your new sense to enjoy for a while

the presence of my sumptuous satire

will drip

onto your lips

 forever…

over, and over again… you’ll thirst no more

for that vibrant hue

as you paint my image in your mind

of tranquility while being stilled

as I am guiding your hands

Somewhere above our firmament or beside a cherubim

I do not see limits but if they're here, I am happy to be trapped,

I've never felt this so it must be a reverie

for my ears have felt surfaces unknown to hands.

I am almost too weak to stand

my eyes comprehend this realm by the mouthfuls  

giving my intellect indigestion,

leaving my heart searching for the proper timing,

In a sentimental mood,

I hope this song never ends.  

            

 

  

                      

 

 

 

Reviews

[Lyrical Love]

Marvin, I now know and trust what I 'feel' even more because of you. I could feel your strength, perspicasity, and confidence under an umbrella of humility by reading your work. The power that you hold-beams around you and your words, leading me to a personal sanctuary of peace. Thank you for your personal time, and thoughts.
The pleasure has been all mine in seeing a masterful protege' of the highest power create, and relate with me. I pray that you stay in the middle of the road (on the right path). The world will be different, refreshed and new after they meet the power of 'you'.
~Warmly, Lyrical

[bailish]

Excellent job of melding two minds. When you truly express yourself, you are sharing yourself in a way similar the vulnerability felt when you immerse yourself in a relationship.

So, will your next poem be a m�nage � troi? :-)

[Ankhesen Mié]

"The ocean's lips"? I can't even tell you how much I loved that!!!

[Angelic Darkness]

This flows like a lovers touch. It's sweet, yet seductive, and promising of two lovers
joining forever and never letting go. AD

[jz]

kudos to you both. i've tried writing poems like this before....found it not easy. you did a wonderful job of it.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

So beautiful .. a feast for the eyes. and senses .. so deep and spirtual. like a new beginning an awakening in a sense it reads lovely and soft and is an inspiration.

Chloe
xoxo

[Bill Grimes Jr.]

"I am wet with sounds sent, to me as you liquefy my spirit cleanse my every being...then, there I will receive you and drink"

This is simply beautiful my friends.........a fine poetic journey of artistic imagery........I look forward to reading more.....

Peace,

Bill :-)

[C.R. Moore "Lasla"]

wonderful work kudos to you both!!!
I especially liked that it was in free verse ...excellent work!
It is hard for two poets to work on lines together and bring together as a completed work from two great poets thxs for the request to read!!!

Lasla

[nostalgic_mermaid]

I love it, it is so beautiful. I especially like that it was free verse and not rhyming. Thx for the request.

[A LaDy NaMeD D]

I love this i'm glad i was requested to read it. Ya'll should make this spoken. As poets you two collaborated perfectly and were one the same page. I feel this poem...you two should collaborate again! Now you both have a new fan.

Danni J

[Nely Amorim]

I enjoyed the interplay with the lyrical prose and the flow was intricate and wonderful. thank u for sharing:)