~Drips from May to September~

This is a coming together of the words that float in rivers of two minds. Lyrical Love (bolded), & Master Marvin Lewis Jr. Enjoy!

 

~Drips from May to September

 

Painting a dreamscape while sitting at the ocean's lips,

only within an empty notebook does this clouded mind rest

A break in the sky to finally see the light

that once shadowed my spirit, is now Leading me to my quest

Leaving behind every dark moment and its hurt, to be healed

right now,  

walking devoid of regrets,

for it is tears that beautify a smile

Warmth from the words of fire strike from your heart

ignite strength in my soul for you to calm

Inside the realms I visit, once my ears taste your beauty,

It is there I comprehend that you were fashioned by the bare hands of God

I am wet with sounds sent, to me as you

liquefy my spirit

cleanse

my every being...

then, there I will receive you

and drink...    

while gazing upon the fragrances your imagination daydreams

the manner in which your mind blossoms

 has made me afraid to blink

the quickness you feel, that will arrive

 will be your new sense to enjoy for a while

the presence of my sumptuous satire

will drip

onto your lips

 forever…

over, and over again… you’ll thirst no more

for that vibrant hue

as you paint my image in your mind

of tranquility while being stilled

as I am guiding your hands

Somewhere above our firmament or beside a cherubim

I do not see limits but if they're here, I am happy to be trapped,

I've never felt this so it must be a reverie

for my ears have felt surfaces unknown to hands.

I am almost too weak to stand

my eyes comprehend this realm by the mouthfuls  

giving my intellect indigestion,

leaving my heart searching for the proper timing,

In a sentimental mood,

I hope this song never ends.  

            

 

  

                      

 

 

 

Reviews

[Lyrical Love]

Marvin, I now know and trust what I 'feel' even more because of you. I could feel your strength, perspicasity, and confidence under an umbrella of humility by reading your work. The power that you hold-beams around you and your words, leading me to a personal sanctuary of peace. Thank you for your personal time, and thoughts.
The pleasure has been all mine in seeing a masterful protege' of the highest power create, and relate with me. I pray that you stay in the middle of the road (on the right path). The world will be different, refreshed and new after they meet the power of 'you'.
~Warmly, Lyrical

[Angel's Lady]

Warmth from the words of fire strike from your heart
ignite strength in my soul for you to calm -- very beautiful imagery...

as you paint my image in your mind
of tranquility while being stilled
as I am guiding your hands

I like this piece a lot...very beautifully written, flows so wonderfully, too...
Nicely done.

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

my eyes comprehend this realm by the mouthfuls giving my intellect indigestion,leaving my heart searching for the proper timing, In a sentimental mood, I hope this song never ends.

I LOVE this end part. pretty good. very good metaphors. great job!!

[BlessedLove]

beautiful....don't be freaked out but this has a very eerie feel...for me atleast...and i LOVE that. It has a "sleepy hollow" kind of thing going on...If u notice..I'm rambling...bcuz idk how to fully express my appreciation for this 1....great tho!

[M Bester]

"you'll thirst no more
for that vibrant hue
as you paint my image in your mind
of tranquility while being stilled"
An amazing feeling of warmth I felt when reading this piece, amazing to see two people mix so well in one poem. Cudo's to both of you for an excellent read, thank you for sharing.

[crap]

nice poem, really enjoyed the line " I do not see limits(comma)but if they're here i'm happy to be trapped" maybe even consider ending it on this strong line.

[Ocean Orchid]

A break in the sky to finally see the light
that once shadowed my spirit, is now Leading me to my quest
Leaving behind every dark moment and its hurt, to be healed
right now,
walking devoid of regrets,
for it is tears that beautify a smile

--------- fantastic piece of poetry

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wow this is so magical and deeply sensual... written with a soft passion and deeply beautiful emotions... what an amazing first piece of yours to read.

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Well written in collaboration with each other. Your words spoke clearly to each other and a masterpiece was created.

[darkgurl]

This is ever so beautiful, Could feel this write, written well and with amazing talent....Kim

[Lia]

Great piece. Really great flow and beautiful wording. Well done x