~Drips from May to September~

This is a coming together of the words that float in rivers of two minds. Lyrical Love (bolded), & Master Marvin Lewis Jr. Enjoy!

 

~Drips from May to September

 

Painting a dreamscape while sitting at the ocean's lips,

only within an empty notebook does this clouded mind rest

A break in the sky to finally see the light

that once shadowed my spirit, is now Leading me to my quest

Leaving behind every dark moment and its hurt, to be healed

right now,  

walking devoid of regrets,

for it is tears that beautify a smile

Warmth from the words of fire strike from your heart

ignite strength in my soul for you to calm

Inside the realms I visit, once my ears taste your beauty,

It is there I comprehend that you were fashioned by the bare hands of God

I am wet with sounds sent, to me as you

liquefy my spirit

cleanse

my every being...

then, there I will receive you

and drink...    

while gazing upon the fragrances your imagination daydreams

the manner in which your mind blossoms

 has made me afraid to blink

the quickness you feel, that will arrive

 will be your new sense to enjoy for a while

the presence of my sumptuous satire

will drip

onto your lips

 forever…

over, and over again… you’ll thirst no more

for that vibrant hue

as you paint my image in your mind

of tranquility while being stilled

as I am guiding your hands

Somewhere above our firmament or beside a cherubim

I do not see limits but if they're here, I am happy to be trapped,

I've never felt this so it must be a reverie

for my ears have felt surfaces unknown to hands.

I am almost too weak to stand

my eyes comprehend this realm by the mouthfuls  

giving my intellect indigestion,

leaving my heart searching for the proper timing,

In a sentimental mood,

I hope this song never ends.  

            

 

  

                      

 

 

 

Reviews

[Lyrical Love]

Marvin, I now know and trust what I 'feel' even more because of you. I could feel your strength, perspicasity, and confidence under an umbrella of humility by reading your work. The power that you hold-beams around you and your words, leading me to a personal sanctuary of peace. Thank you for your personal time, and thoughts.
The pleasure has been all mine in seeing a masterful protege' of the highest power create, and relate with me. I pray that you stay in the middle of the road (on the right path). The world will be different, refreshed and new after they meet the power of 'you'.
~Warmly, Lyrical

[Kim Brooksyn]

Great job! I love the part where it says "I do not see limits but if they're here, I'm happy to be trapped." There is such a smooth feeling in this! :)

[Jolyrose]

"I do not see limits but if they're here, I am happy to be trapped"

That's the line that jerked my heart. I'm happy you have all this beauty to express. Much love.

[Donni]

I like this dialog that entwines together so beautifully. If only people could communicate at this level all the time. Thank you for sharing. Donni

[An owl on the moon]

Powerfully moving and lyrical, and so well developed, flowing like one beautiful stream... Uplifting, soft, tender, and full of vibrant visual images that capture the feel and imagination of life and love...

[bey]

i am still ingesting...

[Jemelle Williams]

Mentally stimulating (applause)
I couldnt stop reading and wanted more once I was finished! Continued climbing with your every word But heres where I paused/peaked...

'Somewhere above our firmament or beside a cherubim I do not see limits but if they're here, I am happy to be trapped'

Powerful! You know what? Ima reread it and get high again!

[Vanessa Richardson]

Wow, this piece flowed flawlessly. I was capitivated from the beginning to the end.

Three snaps from me!

Vanessa

[~Mariposa Una Lila~]

I loved this..it is like a song with no end, you are just beautiful my friend! x0x0

[JadedSparrow]

This melding of two hearts left me speachless. I love the way both of you write. And to be able to enjoy two of my favotire writers on this site in one piece was absolutely fantastic. The flow was flawless. This is truly a work of art. I hope that this is only the first in a collection of collaborations.

JS

[Alford G. Harris]

:)) This was very smooth and subtly expressive. Nice