to SUFFER

This is the poem that started it all for me. The WIND blew 1night, onto me, purging me...setting me free. Sometimes we get lost, or fall down...but finding your Way, and getting back up, with HIM, Ur ok.

 

~to Suffer ~                       

                             

How could you not miss what

we ...have?      

Did we ever have it?

I could not have been wrong.

I could feel him not only when I felt him.

Was it hard to play that role?

Of whom you really were not.

I thought it was something really wrong… me

Wanting always to forgive, and get over it?

I thought there was nothing wrong to continue.

I have heard words from him with no sound.

My music is dead.

I have learned to live in the NOW.

I cannot live for what could or might not be.

                              ~That might kill me…

I want to live.

And for that to last, not only in the future

But NOW.

Do I forget the past?

How?             

You forget by knowing what you have right NOW.

Nothing…

So you live!

You live and come out of the dark lonely hole

Queen you still have your soul.

What you had was good

What you had was it... good?

He is gone

The thought of something , anything, keeping me

The thing that kept me is revealing to me.

Appreciate. Learn. Continue to trust.

He has a bigger plan for you, and you must.

The tie is broken

He says, just follow...

There are much brighter days my precious gem… tomorrow.

You had to SUFFER, ...and endure.

So that you could see the impure.

Sweet dreams and sunshine NOW!

He says follow me my beloved and I will show you how.

I feel no pain.

I feel no sorrow.

I have HIM in my heart for my tomorrow.

I leaned on you, and you when I could

I thought you were my Rock, wrongly understood

Mighty you were until you let it get to you

Was it juicy (you liked)?

Or Luci (who liked you)?

Whatever it was…will not be.

You see I have cried my last tear-yesterday.

I have to remember he promised me better tomorrow.

He said to give all you have is not a bad thing-just sacrifice the ring.

You trust me don’t you?

Follow me to your tomorrows.

           ~Listen to My Voice~

You can’t go wrong. Keep praising ME.I AM the better choice.

No regrets. You had to suffer.

You had to toil.

 When I gave you My WORD, you placed it in the soil.

You know NOW

 to trust ME and follow my sound.

Together we’ll break fallow ground.

I know you want his  truth and love,

But my dear it is not greater than what is above.

I know you like flowers.

You will get that plus more, when I demonstrate my mighty powers.

You are on the right track-I told you today.

You are well on the way.

It’s easy NOW.

You are about to see.

When you only trust ME.I AM your GOD!

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Remember with Rain...brings growth.

Reviews

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

I..........LOVED........THIS.........PIECE! I had to read it twice to get the full scope and to realized that you were writing on behalf of God! Very impressive and forthright!

"I feel no pain.
I feel no sorrow.
I have HIM in my heart for my tomorrow.
I leaned on you, and you when I could
I thought you were my Rock, wrongly understood
Mighty you were until you let it get to you
Was it juicy (you liked)?"

Very emotional as only LL can! I love your metaphors. Very intelligent and clear(especially after a 2nd read). I think God feels this way most of the time! We take him for granted, but it can also be translated as the woman in his life being just as badly mistreated, and the bible says to put your wife in front of no one and for her treatment to be representation of your feelings towards God; or something like that, I don't know, it's been a while, and I think I heard that somewhere, but anyway.......this was a great write! Very beautifully written. It's Classic Lyrical Love.....

[TP LaRose]

A very powerful poem. We must remember that we cannot forget the past or change it. We can only learn from it and carry on. We all must find the light within ourselves to continue on. We are all beautiful beings with the strength to endure anything we may come across in our lives. I'm not sure who said this but...If God brings you to it, He will see you through it.

I keep that posted wherever I can and remind myself of it constantly. We all have a divine plan and we must let ourselves discover this in the way God has intended us to.
I very much enjoyed your work. It held the power of HOPE while still allowing the reader to feel the darkness and pain you have felt.

When it is the darkest we see the stars.

[Lady V]

I have HIM in my heart for my tomorrow.


Wow. I see this in so many lights. It, for me, was a signification of memories that are with us forever. He may not be in my life but his impression is left for me to do as I plaese. WOW. Then it also says that we lead by example and that we try to do not what they have done before us. There is so much in this one line.

Together we'll break fallow ground

Unity in a relationship does so much more than spell out love. It strengthens the future you as a whole will see. In this unity we find stability and trust. It lifts our spirits and takes us on a journey that will take us far beyond where we have ever been.

Great piece. plaese keep sharing.

Live, Love and Learn
Lady V

[Anima Inspired]

I do agree with "Lost Rose" in that I enjoy the way that this piece seems to take the reader on a journey of sorts...through the heart and the mind of someone who is feeling so much. There is an intensity in the lines that creates a truly tragic and yet beautiful tone. I quite enjoyed this...

[~amanda~]

your authors note reminds me of a song in les miserables "a little fall of rain"

the lyrics are something like 'and rain will make the flowers grow"

so poetic, and beautiful. just like your work =)

[THE LOST ROSE]

Wow what a poem. You have allowed us to travel a journey with you. For those of us that are going through something you said it is okay to suffer because I have done it. Great poem. Please continue. I love these three lines below.
Mighty you were until you let it get to you
Was it juicy (you liked)?
Or Luci (who liked you)?