to SUFFER

This is the poem that started it all for me. The WIND blew 1night, onto me, purging me...setting me free. Sometimes we get lost, or fall down...but finding your Way, and getting back up, with HIM, Ur ok.

 

~to Suffer ~                       

                             

How could you not miss what

we ...have?      

Did we ever have it?

I could not have been wrong.

I could feel him not only when I felt him.

Was it hard to play that role?

Of whom you really were not.

I thought it was something really wrong… me

Wanting always to forgive, and get over it?

I thought there was nothing wrong to continue.

I have heard words from him with no sound.

My music is dead.

I have learned to live in the NOW.

I cannot live for what could or might not be.

                              ~That might kill me…

I want to live.

And for that to last, not only in the future

But NOW.

Do I forget the past?

How?             

You forget by knowing what you have right NOW.

Nothing…

So you live!

You live and come out of the dark lonely hole

Queen you still have your soul.

What you had was good

What you had was it... good?

He is gone

The thought of something , anything, keeping me

The thing that kept me is revealing to me.

Appreciate. Learn. Continue to trust.

He has a bigger plan for you, and you must.

The tie is broken

He says, just follow...

There are much brighter days my precious gem… tomorrow.

You had to SUFFER, ...and endure.

So that you could see the impure.

Sweet dreams and sunshine NOW!

He says follow me my beloved and I will show you how.

I feel no pain.

I feel no sorrow.

I have HIM in my heart for my tomorrow.

I leaned on you, and you when I could

I thought you were my Rock, wrongly understood

Mighty you were until you let it get to you

Was it juicy (you liked)?

Or Luci (who liked you)?

Whatever it was…will not be.

You see I have cried my last tear-yesterday.

I have to remember he promised me better tomorrow.

He said to give all you have is not a bad thing-just sacrifice the ring.

You trust me don’t you?

Follow me to your tomorrows.

           ~Listen to My Voice~

You can’t go wrong. Keep praising ME.I AM the better choice.

No regrets. You had to suffer.

You had to toil.

 When I gave you My WORD, you placed it in the soil.

You know NOW

 to trust ME and follow my sound.

Together we’ll break fallow ground.

I know you want his  truth and love,

But my dear it is not greater than what is above.

I know you like flowers.

You will get that plus more, when I demonstrate my mighty powers.

You are on the right track-I told you today.

You are well on the way.

It’s easy NOW.

You are about to see.

When you only trust ME.I AM your GOD!

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Remember with Rain...brings growth.

Reviews

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

I..........LOVED........THIS.........PIECE! I had to read it twice to get the full scope and to realized that you were writing on behalf of God! Very impressive and forthright!

"I feel no pain.
I feel no sorrow.
I have HIM in my heart for my tomorrow.
I leaned on you, and you when I could
I thought you were my Rock, wrongly understood
Mighty you were until you let it get to you
Was it juicy (you liked)?"

Very emotional as only LL can! I love your metaphors. Very intelligent and clear(especially after a 2nd read). I think God feels this way most of the time! We take him for granted, but it can also be translated as the woman in his life being just as badly mistreated, and the bible says to put your wife in front of no one and for her treatment to be representation of your feelings towards God; or something like that, I don't know, it's been a while, and I think I heard that somewhere, but anyway.......this was a great write! Very beautifully written. It's Classic Lyrical Love.....

[C.J.]

wow this is so very good i could feel the feelings of the person good job.

[Dionysus Cain]

interesting, it kinda has me like okay i understand , then hold on , but i get it. nicely written, but don't always belive in something you can't see, yes, you can feel things, but remeber , we feel what are minds tell us is real, so i take it as everything is an illusion, a pause in reseasoning with our own sanity.. we belive in what we tell ourselves is real, but reality, we are all we have until we get buried.

[BlessedLove]

that was powerful and inspirational and I could totally relate...loved it

[C.R. Moore "Lasla"]

Indeed! one walking ones own path is the only way to be true to your heart and soul regardless of what you choose to call it... it remains in your soul as a part of what you stand and believe in. ........ wonderfully written ......enjoyed the flow of your verses...good job!

Lasla

[Ray Hamilton]

True Love is wonderful
But if only one is truly in love there is hurt and suffering
Sad that some people can't seem to be honest,
It would be so much easier on the heart
Let yourself be lead to your true love I'm sure he is out there
Sorry for your loss
Ray

[Lyrical Love]

I love the reviews, and the interpretations that are found in your creative minds. I can totally understand the 'chop-iness' that is felt by the "LUCKY HABIT". I can clearly see the rebirthing process, and the coming out of a cocoon here. I can also relate to a person that doesn't understand when you are 'chosen' by God, and given direction as well, and somehow you end up feeling, and being led by your flesh (what makes you feel good-not just sexually, emotionally, but spiritually too). When this poem started IN ME, it was transforming, as well as awakening. I did not correct some of the wording -purposefully. It was the middle of the night and at a difficult state of emotion for me too. If one starts at the beginning of the poem it is wordy, no real rhythm or flow, and then, the music starts to play. The writing starts to sing, and become rhythmic. During that whole process it was purging for me. At that time I knew I needed to humble myself, and recognize the lesson learned, and trust HIM.
Thanks for the reviews!
xoxo, Lyrical

[Windy]

A "mighty" write. A few weeks ago I may not have understood, but now, today and tomorrow I do and I will. We all bear our burdens but always keep in our minds and heats that there are better tomorrows. I have sufferd, I have toiled, I bear pain and tears as we all do or have at one time or another, yet as you say "follow his voice for there will be better tomorrows". One of my favorite parts " you had to suffer, and endure so you could see the impure" then "I feel no pain, I feel no sorrow, I have him in my heart for tomorrow" wow, a powerful and inspiring write (as Lucky Habit said). Well done, well said..........

[Alwaysthinking]

Very powerful. A bit choppy but very inspiring!

[Miss Habit]

Um powerful, inspiring but hard for me to relate to, by no cause of your own, in fact I related quite well until the very last line. It sort of ruined the whole poem for me, probably because I don't believe in god but I think it is a very nice worded poem, good job, although maybe add stanzas where another person is talking to make it flow nicer?

[Kristin Brecoe]

this is a really good piec, the ideas behind it were well thought. good job. orry it took me a while to review it.

-kristin