to SUFFER

This is the poem that started it all for me. The WIND blew 1night, onto me, purging me...setting me free. Sometimes we get lost, or fall down...but finding your Way, and getting back up, with HIM, Ur ok.

 

~to Suffer ~                       

                             

How could you not miss what

we ...have?      

Did we ever have it?

I could not have been wrong.

I could feel him not only when I felt him.

Was it hard to play that role?

Of whom you really were not.

I thought it was something really wrong… me

Wanting always to forgive, and get over it?

I thought there was nothing wrong to continue.

I have heard words from him with no sound.

My music is dead.

I have learned to live in the NOW.

I cannot live for what could or might not be.

                              ~That might kill me…

I want to live.

And for that to last, not only in the future

But NOW.

Do I forget the past?

How?             

You forget by knowing what you have right NOW.

Nothing…

So you live!

You live and come out of the dark lonely hole

Queen you still have your soul.

What you had was good

What you had was it... good?

He is gone

The thought of something , anything, keeping me

The thing that kept me is revealing to me.

Appreciate. Learn. Continue to trust.

He has a bigger plan for you, and you must.

The tie is broken

He says, just follow...

There are much brighter days my precious gem… tomorrow.

You had to SUFFER, ...and endure.

So that you could see the impure.

Sweet dreams and sunshine NOW!

He says follow me my beloved and I will show you how.

I feel no pain.

I feel no sorrow.

I have HIM in my heart for my tomorrow.

I leaned on you, and you when I could

I thought you were my Rock, wrongly understood

Mighty you were until you let it get to you

Was it juicy (you liked)?

Or Luci (who liked you)?

Whatever it was…will not be.

You see I have cried my last tear-yesterday.

I have to remember he promised me better tomorrow.

He said to give all you have is not a bad thing-just sacrifice the ring.

You trust me don’t you?

Follow me to your tomorrows.

           ~Listen to My Voice~

You can’t go wrong. Keep praising ME.I AM the better choice.

No regrets. You had to suffer.

You had to toil.

 When I gave you My WORD, you placed it in the soil.

You know NOW

 to trust ME and follow my sound.

Together we’ll break fallow ground.

I know you want his  truth and love,

But my dear it is not greater than what is above.

I know you like flowers.

You will get that plus more, when I demonstrate my mighty powers.

You are on the right track-I told you today.

You are well on the way.

It’s easy NOW.

You are about to see.

When you only trust ME.I AM your GOD!

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Remember with Rain...brings growth.

Reviews

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

I..........LOVED........THIS.........PIECE! I had to read it twice to get the full scope and to realized that you were writing on behalf of God! Very impressive and forthright!

"I feel no pain.
I feel no sorrow.
I have HIM in my heart for my tomorrow.
I leaned on you, and you when I could
I thought you were my Rock, wrongly understood
Mighty you were until you let it get to you
Was it juicy (you liked)?"

Very emotional as only LL can! I love your metaphors. Very intelligent and clear(especially after a 2nd read). I think God feels this way most of the time! We take him for granted, but it can also be translated as the woman in his life being just as badly mistreated, and the bible says to put your wife in front of no one and for her treatment to be representation of your feelings towards God; or something like that, I don't know, it's been a while, and I think I heard that somewhere, but anyway.......this was a great write! Very beautifully written. It's Classic Lyrical Love.....

[universalove]

The heart in my soul has not felt for any cause ,because once it was broke I learn to trust me and no one else. Except the joy of life. To understand that people are here for one reason. To make each other happy. Which at times it only last for a little while to move on to the next feeling without any pain. GOD KNOWS BEST. Good write.

[sheerpoetry]

U know how much of a cry baby i am. I am so touched

[Jason]

You're the truth for sure. A lot of your pieces deal with your love of the creator, and that is a beautiful thing indeed.

" There are much brighter days my precious gem� tomorrow.
You had to SUFFER, ...and endure."

I think we must remember to endure!

Thanks

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

What doesn't kill makes strong. However, the pain and fear still lingers.


You have poured your heart out with this piece. I felt your pain, but I also felt your strength to continue and make a new life.


This part I believe that the abused woman is speaking to herself and basking in new found faith. She may be broken, but her soul is still hers to join with Gods. Tell me if I'm right.



Queen you still have your soul.What you had was goodWhat you had was it... good?He is goneThe thought of something , anything, keeping meThe thing that kept me is revealing to me.Appreciate. Learn. Continue to trust.He has a bigger plan for you, and you must.The tie is brokenHe says, just follow...There are much brighter days my precious gem� tomorrow.You had to SUFFER, ...and endure.So that you could see the impure.Sweet dreams and sunshine NOW!He says follow me my beloved and I will show you how.I feel no pain.I feel no sorrow.I have HIM in my heart for my tomorrow.

[☮]

Yes. Pain endured is strength gained with each breathing day. I totally understand this and have had this conversation with God many times... it's an internal battle to leave yesterday for the present and tomorrow. There is power in valuing your present breath and forgetting your prior mishaps.

Loved this:
"You forget by knowing what you have right NOW.Nothing�So you live!"

Great as usual.

[Lynx]

Wow, this is an amazing poem, with great meaning, but sometimes it does sound a bit like spoken word, maybe a bit more flow? Also, I love the way it's someone of a speech of forcing someone to love the writer, definitely not cliche, I'm not being sarcastic.

[Adrian K. Smith]

There is a dance within these words, moving forward, spinning and twisting those little steps to keep the rhythm of life breathing free of the morass that would hold one down. It is a spiritual movement, by which grace will set you free, though one might question the tests and the burdens one faces; it is sometimes through the toughest of lessons that we are finally stripped bare of our preconceptions and our misconceptions so that we can see what truly matters in our lives. The contrasting love weaves itself through your words into us like some truth fluttering just out of our reach, but we merely need to pause for a moment - ask for that guidance - and then all shall be revealed as truth in its own time.

[kollaboratyve]

A feverish 15 minute standing ovation,the crowd went crazy! The angels of heavens came down to see what all the noise was about. YOU ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[DiamondNRough AKA Patty..]

Beautiful...Suffering and Surviving makes so much Stronger. I love the Bold awareness of certain words you used.