I need to see you...

This came to me at a moment-when I needed to wake up

 

 

 

I need to see you differently

Not as my other half

I am burying that in my past

I need to see you differently

For me to see you I have to trust

That is gone and survival is a must

I need to see you differently     

Not as my future, not as my king

That is why I have switched my ring

I need to see you differently

As someone who will soon depart

You are no longer there in my heart

I need to see you differently

For my beginning to arise

I am sorry you are not privy to my prize

I need to see you differently

And I wish you well, and to become new

For my love was right. Just not for you.

Reviews

[Walkingblind]

You've built up such a great reputation in my mind that I
have come to expect nothing but great poems from your hand.
This is a marvelous piece, that seemed to be written just after
your alarm clock woke you up tp a new reality. I could almost hear u
talking to yourself, telling your mind to be strong, reprogramming your
thoughts I am hooked to your work. Another great write Lyrik!

[Lady V]

This piece speaks so much of when we get to the point when we are just done. By that time tears have been shed and sorrows have been bled but they are no longer a piece of your heart. I love this poem. It is really well written and It tells all for those who didnt know. lol

Great piece

Live, Love and Learn

Lady V

[THE LOST ROSE]

This poem screams get your act together before you get a poem like this. Very powerful, very deep and just plain ol' great. Keep writing Lyrical

[Anima Inspired]

The sentiment in this piece is beautiful, and the words float and swing across the page as if in thier own dance. The flow was nice, the feel was good...my only problem was with the font...it was a little hard for me to read, and thus I had to search for certain words and that broke up my reading a little. I understand the use of the "script" text, but maybe just make it a little larger.