Barely heard

Barely heard

A Poem by Lyrical Love
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We...hear what we want to hear.

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                A silent little cry
Barely heard in the distance
Of life for the busy man
The hustle and bustle, are steady
Like a song…     
The lack of compassion for others
~is wrong
                Quiet the sounds of greed, anger, and contention
Feel the hunger, and lack
Of the little ones not mentioned
…living on the streets, with a sister, and strife
                                And no Mother…
Or Father to make a life…
…for the silent little cry,
                Barely heard in the distance.

© 2008 Lyrical Love


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I have a soft place in my heart for this subject. I love how you describe their voice
and the attention we as a whole society show them as
"A silent little cry barely heard in the distance"
I feel like that's dead true!

"The hustle and bustle, are steady
Like a song�
The lack of compassion for others
~is wrong
Quiet the sounds of greed, anger, and contention
Feel the hunger, and lack of the little ones not mentioned"

These lines were beautiful and well put inside this piece.
You captured the mood and the emotion of this matter perfectly!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Beautiful song here. I can hear Marvin Gaye or Bob Marley singing it. Kudos

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

good subject material, beautifully written.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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