Perfect Love

This feeling...I tried to put into words/song...have to be experienced for the truth of that moment.

 

~Perfect Love~

I walked outside into

An engulfing night of beauty

The sunset almost missed…held me passionately

To look grace in the eye…Was worth the moment it commenced…

If I were completely unclothed, I would feel

                The gentleness of a touch~

Breathing in… that space…smelling the stillness

…Of peace, …during the end of a perfectly colored sunset

 Peaking…

Just over the tops of many reaching trees

 

I would feel total comfort… to, not experience

 Another feeling, perception or touch…humanly, again

 

…for you to be enveloped, into a knowing of total tranquility

You must believe… completely

~ In what, is not seen

It far surpasses any thought… of great imagination

To leap… over the highest mountain of reality

…and feel your nakedness exposed, yet covered

I was embraced ...by HIS excellence,

~the most perfect love.

 

 

 

 

                          

 

Author's Note

In your mind close your eyes...take off your clothes...walk outside, now enjoy the moment(read).

Reviews

[Walkingblind]

I really enjoy your poems about men because their so true and deep
they move people to think about past relationships, and hurt. Your poems
about God are so much stronger because your soul has transformed into something
tangible and left pieces of itself in your words. I love the warm feeling that comes
over me when reading this it's like the aroma of a mother's food, spiritual home cooking
if you will. Beautiful account of your time with God! don't stop writing I'll have no woman poet
to catch up to then!

[Ray Hamilton]

Wonderfully written poem
Thanks for sharing
Ray

[charlotte talley]

great poem, and yes I can see the imagery of it. you have a wonderful way with your words. keep it up.

[Zyanya]

An elegant balance of the human and divine absolutely beautiful. The mention of the sunset almost missed reminded me of the delicate truth that creation holds.

[WhiteRabbit]

lots of good imagery, alluring, open, altoghether a very nice read.

[Alford G. Harris]

you have a beautiful voice... the language is true to form (lyrical), and the imagery is elegant and sensual... your spiritual nature is written all over this one LL... Kudos, write on...

[Amy Carrington]

I could really visualize all of this, this is such a well written poem. Great job.

[Marvin Lewis Jr.]

Your words have a cinematic aroma like your thought used to be a painting or something...
I love the way your writings take on a classic feel and how you put so much thought into each metaphor.
Its been a pleasure reading!