Dance your way into me

There is a naked form that must be exposed and then covered by a truth in knowing real love.

 

I’ll meet you away…far, far away… in the dark

Over there by that flowering tree …in the park

The one that smells… so sweetly

You say you want me,

and to be into… me

Look into my eyes and feel~

What my soul sings

Without touching me

My lyrics

will calm your spirit

 as I prepare you

 for this journey…to see

how to… dance your way into me

know that what I say is truth

your fears, tears,

weaknesses and inhibitions

must falter…for this experience with me

I need you to be perfect… in your mind

Perfect in your heart…and pure

Deep in your soul

So that you may endure

What’s ahead…as I start to run

Follow me,

 at my pace

Know my love,

…this is not a race

I am able to keep up with the wind~

…Dancing a gallop for all to see

 believe in yourself

when you see my strength… that you have to be

what I look at, when it is you… I see

My rhythm is starting

I feel myself moving…running, jumping, and leaping

I can soar with HIS wind blowing under

My wings~

…I feel you far in the rear

Heart pounding, preparing to leave your space

That is a dark hole without light, nor vigor

Feeling my words…

Your soul is trying to learn a new tune

Filling your spirit with fresh air

…Eyes closed for the new moon

HE kisses your forehead

You feel yourself becoming anew…and energized

As you start to run

 As a warrior would…your heart beat now

sounds like a tribal drum

knowing you listened , and accepted truth

your refuse starts to fall off being lost

in the trees

I run faster to leap over the lake,

Enjoying the cool night air

To start up the mountain

…My soul is prepared

For the light… that soon we will share

As I slow to become conscious

My run is changing to frolic

the tune my heart now beats is a calling of… lyrical love

knowing that you will soon

beam with a new radiance

that comes from being unbound…

knowing that light makes you

limitless, and free…

You are now ready to hold my hand

…Up on the mountain

Under the moon, and in the light

As you dance into me. Copyright © 2008 by Lyrical Love   

Reviews

[Dionysus Cain]

this poem is about someone excepting god, there basically is one person trying to get a lost soul to run with them into the light of god and once that person gets there they can be free. the both of them in the same light. with perfect souls and a common balance with a higher power. but the thing is that not all sheep were made to go into the light, some of them where meant to be left a stray.

[EMMIE]

SO BEAUTIFUL AND TOUCHING. INTERESTING CONCEPT. YOU HAVE SO MANY GREAT LINES IN THIS POEM, I CAN'T TYPE THEM ALL B/C I WOULD JUST END UP RETYPING THE ENTIRE POEM LOL. LOVE THE STYLE, THIS READS SO SMOOTHLY. GREAT WORK

[Shellie]

I really enjoyed this poem, I felt it was a different way of expressing in words how the poet accepts God into her life; I really admire the way that was done. Its one of those extremely refreshing and uplifting poems that cannot be forgotten. Well Done.

[universalove]

This poem is so beautiful.That the words touch my spirit.I really enjoyed your poem.Thank you for the thought.

[REALIZE]

"I need you to be perfect… in your mind
Perfect in your heart…and pure
Deep in your soul
So that you may endure
What’s ahead…as I start to run "

This was smooth. And it read that way. I feel this poem. The imagery was poignant and it never got redundant.

[jewellz]

great

[Sean Allen]

Even though this is a longer poem than we might like in this world of fast everything, I had to come back and read it again. As expected, it was better the second time through as I am sure it will be with another reading. I see a poem about love and God that reaches another level as the reader follows you, listens to you, and finally earns the right to dance into you.

You know how sometimes you can listen to a song over and over again, never tiring of it?
You have done that with words that allow me to hear the lyrics of this beautiful song you have written.

Well done my friend, very well done!
but I can't get it out of my mind.

[BABSIE BEE]

WAW...This is a fabulous" should you should,nt you" piece. It takes all sorts to make a world. What is right for one can be made right for another. I love this. Thanks for it !!!

Babsie Bee xx

[Vaishali..^_^]

nice write...!!
I run faster to leap over the lake,
Enjoying the cool night air
To start up the mountain
�My soul is prepared
For the light� that soon we will share
As I slow to become conscious
My run is changing to frolic
the tune my heart now beats is a calling of� lyrical love...
awesome...!!
great write...!!

[An owl on the moon]

So powerfully moving, vivid in form, and alive with all that is beautiful and enduring! Loved the feel of walking and then running, sensing the rhythm and vibrance of each word and phrase... Amazingly lifting!

[Jason]

I embrace your style of writing. It pained me that this piece had to end, but that allowed me to read it again. Each time I read it, it takes me some where else. To me that is what makes a song, book, movie, trip, or anything else you can think of Great, being able to finding something new in something old. One can not create that kind of work, it can not be learned. "It" happens. Thanks.