Here or There

when there is disconnect of the hearts, and the mind wanders

 ~ Here or there~

 

 

 

Is it real when you… can

Find …Love over there,

When you are supposed to be …here

…Is it real when you find your…mind

creeping…

When you should be sleeping…here

Is it for you when you can find passion

There,

…when you lost it here,

Is it real how you smile at me…

…and I emptily stare at you

Is this real…for me here,

Missing you there?

          

Reviews

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

Whoa!!! Very powerfully spoken! This speaks volumes to what I'm sure tons of people (married, involved), I'm sure feel at one point in their respective relationships. I'm sure you're gonna get a sermon from someone saying "It's about finding the passion with the one you're with, blah, blah, blah...." But I see and respect the moment of expression that you've written here without analyzing the solution. Short, but strong and telling. I think people will feel this. I know I did! Is that why I'm single? Hmmmmmmmmmmmm

[Marvin Lewis Jr.]

I love your style!
My favorite part-
"Is it real when you find your... Mind creeping... When you should be sleeping..."
This is true lyricism!

[Lady V]

love this poem. It is short, sweet and to the point. When passion dies in a relationship it does not mean that it dies in the person. They try to find someone to make it lively again. This poem is great.

LIve, Love and Learn

Lady V

[WhiteRabbit]

Nicely written, juxtapositioning is done very well, its's a very good read, thank you for sharing

[bailish]

Is the world we perceive as real the real world, or is our dream world the real world? Interesting musings.

Can our desires make it reality?

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

lol...Poetic...

This is a great love poem. Despite the narrator's pondering tone, this poem seems much happier than other pieces with this same content. I have to admit, I am very impressed. ^^ Thank you for sharing this with me. It was an excellent read. :)

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood