Trois francais baisers (Three French Kisses)

 Trois français baisers

(Three French kisses)

 

I have drifted through the fluidity of pain, and solitude

For quite some time now

Searching,

And being searched…

Only to discover something that I knew

…that I am perfect, for only You~

Would take most a lifetime… to not, know this…

Please accept… my first French kiss

~Close your eyes…and

Let me blow…softly

This message

into your ear…

I am perfect for you…

…The finely tailored suits

You have adorned for your

Exquisite liking,

With custom shirts, donning your initials on the sleeves

That fit you like a king,

…have not even a thread of my sensuality, and touch

I will place my scent

Around your neck…like the finest jewels and pearls,

Draped …Majestically

~My Love…

Let me, undress you with my librettos

…that will shield and clothe

Your vulnerabilities,

No one but I, will see…

With my deepest

Feelings,

I’ll enlighten your world with an elegant hue…

And refinement of my cherished best

Stripping you of the superficial garments that hide

~The man behind the mask…

Lay your mind down for soothing, and rest…

I am going to pour myself onto you like

Hot wax,

So that you can feel,

My fleshly

Intensity, and know I am real…

The silkiness… of my core…

Will make your stature shriek,

Crying out to me, for more

I want to show

You,

my love,

…just how I fit you, like a glove

Of how,

…not only has my spirit-exuded temptation…

You cannot resist…gently accept my second,

French kiss.

After time, and more time passes

You by,

What is meant for your mind,

soul, and body

is no longer in the sky

I am perfect for you

in every way,

And any… way you position me

…your spirit clearly can feel and see

I am perfect for you…

Imagine this,

Forever… my best…eager for you to enjoy,

Covering your soul with all of my love

…And my flesh dressed in your flesh

befitting like a glove…

meshed, and intertwined

intricately for strength…creating a force

against the world,

Can you imagine this?

~My love…

If so, accept my third French kiss.

 

Author's Note

Try reading out loud...

Reviews

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

Classic, classic L......... Where do I go with this? You are a perfect cup of coffee! Your words are so smooth and it just flows like silk. Your poetry is silk! It's so smooth and intelligent. I know your work from jump. You wouldn't even have to put your name on it. It would just pour onto my screen and I'd know!

Stripping you of the superficial garments that hide
~The man behind the mask�
Lay your mind down for soothing, and rest�
I am going to pour myself onto you like
Hot wax,
So that you can feel,
My fleshly
Intensity, and know I am real�
The silkiness� of my core�
Will make your stature shriek,
Crying out to me, for more
I want to show
You,
my love,
�just how I fit you, like a glove

YUM.....YUM...............Muthafuckin YUM!!!

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

A story passionatly told from beging to end, creative idea in introducing each kiss.

Thanks for entering my contest and the best of luck.

[bluessadmood]

this is very nice words and images,so full of love ,love is so strong here ,you go describing it in more than few different ways ,shows how happy you are having so much love in your life ,really great ,its like a song to my ear,wonderful

[Marvin Lewis Jr.]

I had to read this three times and then pause to give my mind a chance to interpret what my soul just experienced... I'm ready now!
I love the sensual pace, the beautiful structure, and the intense imagery...
The way you introduced each kiss was well-timed and innovative, I applaud you for engaging every one of my senses. This has to be the most tangible poem I've ever read, I like the wordplay and the climax/ending of this piece leaves me as the reader wanting more.
The manner in which you reiterated..." I am perfect for you" sent something through me, I feel honored to be able to read such lovely mental sketches.
"I will place my scent around your neck... LIke the finest jewels and pearls"
"I'm going to pour myself onto you like hot wax"
Nothing can be said about these lines or this entire poem except that you are truly extraordinary!
I think I'm in love with your mind! lol

Bravo!

-Marv

[Samuel Dickens]

I think I might need some ointment for my burns. This one got a little hot. French kisses are definately dandy and taste like candy.

[Miss Habit]

I chose to review this poem because I have been talking daily with a love interest I met online that happens to live n France, I felt it, rather I feel it, amazing description, I too smelled aromas not mentioned, but imbeded into the soul of the writing, I love making people smell or taste with my writing, it's powerful, and I think when I did this for the first time was the first time I realized what quality writing was and also that I was a quality writer. So cheers, this is quality, I thoroughly enjoyed it I will surely read & review other works by you take care.
Stephanie

[THE LOST ROSE]

This piece will make you forget about any blues you might be having. Love the anticipation of the build. I accept!

[~amanda~]

this isnt a poem or a story it is art. amazing images and voice... simply stunning and beautiful in every way

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I truly love this. It is a wonderful work of art. The subject does not matter to me so much as the way it is addressed, and this is superbly rounded. It has very good logical progression, (although a bit shaky in the attempted rhyme in a few places) and the same could be said of many fine poems by master poets. The words were well thought out and gripped each other like links in a chain, you have very strong descriptive skills...but this you know. lol on a scale of 1 to 10, this is a 9.9, fantastic work!

[bailish]

"I am going to pour myself onto you like Hot wax," Sounds painful! :D

This poem transports me to a different plane. I see the sensuality of the encounter, the perfect match, but also the pleading of wanting satisfaction that has eluded up to this point.

Excellent read!