Trois francais baisers (Three French Kisses)

 Trois français baisers

(Three French kisses)

 

I have drifted through the fluidity of pain, and solitude

For quite some time now

Searching,

And being searched…

Only to discover something that I knew

…that I am perfect, for only You~

Would take most a lifetime… to not, know this…

Please accept… my first French kiss

~Close your eyes…and

Let me blow…softly

This message

into your ear…

I am perfect for you…

…The finely tailored suits

You have adorned for your

Exquisite liking,

With custom shirts, donning your initials on the sleeves

That fit you like a king,

…have not even a thread of my sensuality, and touch

I will place my scent

Around your neck…like the finest jewels and pearls,

Draped …Majestically

~My Love…

Let me, undress you with my librettos

…that will shield and clothe

Your vulnerabilities,

No one but I, will see…

With my deepest

Feelings,

I’ll enlighten your world with an elegant hue…

And refinement of my cherished best

Stripping you of the superficial garments that hide

~The man behind the mask…

Lay your mind down for soothing, and rest…

I am going to pour myself onto you like

Hot wax,

So that you can feel,

My fleshly

Intensity, and know I am real…

The silkiness… of my core…

Will make your stature shriek,

Crying out to me, for more

I want to show

You,

my love,

…just how I fit you, like a glove

Of how,

…not only has my spirit-exuded temptation…

You cannot resist…gently accept my second,

French kiss.

After time, and more time passes

You by,

What is meant for your mind,

soul, and body

is no longer in the sky

I am perfect for you

in every way,

And any… way you position me

…your spirit clearly can feel and see

I am perfect for you…

Imagine this,

Forever… my best…eager for you to enjoy,

Covering your soul with all of my love

…And my flesh dressed in your flesh

befitting like a glove…

meshed, and intertwined

intricately for strength…creating a force

against the world,

Can you imagine this?

~My love…

If so, accept my third French kiss.

 

Author's Note

Try reading out loud...

Reviews

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

Classic, classic L......... Where do I go with this? You are a perfect cup of coffee! Your words are so smooth and it just flows like silk. Your poetry is silk! It's so smooth and intelligent. I know your work from jump. You wouldn't even have to put your name on it. It would just pour onto my screen and I'd know!

Stripping you of the superficial garments that hide
~The man behind the mask�
Lay your mind down for soothing, and rest�
I am going to pour myself onto you like
Hot wax,
So that you can feel,
My fleshly
Intensity, and know I am real�
The silkiness� of my core�
Will make your stature shriek,
Crying out to me, for more
I want to show
You,
my love,
�just how I fit you, like a glove

YUM.....YUM...............Muthafuckin YUM!!!

[jewellz]

4:34 am in Nowhere New Mexico: this poem is just a joy to read, it's wonderfully playful, thank you for a great g'morning read.

[☮]

Very soothing and hypnotic flow. You have a knack for massaging the words into your reader. Very nice write. The level of intimacy is matched by the beautiful language associated with this fine work.

[crap]

enjoyed this one, very sensual and personal, has a great sense of voice, was slightly thrown off by the unconventional structure. interrupted the flow for me personally. great job though.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

This is really amazing... truly a very romantic piece that just has left me breathless and speechless... I am in complete awe of this piece. Sorry I can't say anything more creative but you have me blown away.

[Nymphadora]

dearie, though this poem is highly sensual, it is still filled with hilarity, good rhythm and soothing words...

"Searching,
And being searched�
Only to discover something that I knew
�that I am perfect, for only You~"

inspiring line for those in search of a "soulmate".

Frenchkiss... cutie.

[nocturnalbeast]

This waz nice!!!!!.
I loved reading this.!!!!

[darkgurl]

I loved this so wonderfully brillant writing, has romance and sincerity in it....Kim

[Autumn's Child]

I absolutely LOVE this! It's so playful in the rhythm, the words so deliciously pleasant in their form and in their imagery. Fantastic!

[Gordon]

This truely is "lyrical love"! It's funny, I've read it twice now and thought to myself, "this would be great if a woman read this aloud to me." Then I just saw your author's note saying just that, "try reading out loud". It's erotic yet sincere at the same time. The spacing and punctuation are a bit interesting and I think I understand why you did it this way, but this poem would likely stand completely on it's own in standard verse. I'm really surprised though at just how good it is.

My favorite lines:
Let me, undress you with my librettos
�that will shield and clothe
Your vulnerabilities,
No one but I, will see� (The way you describe this intamacy is amazing, reassuring and gently)
With my deepest
Feelings,
I'll enlighten your world with an elegant hue� (After me you will see things differently)
And refinement of my cherished best (I have saved the best of me for you)
Stripping you of the superficial garments that hide
~The man behind the mask�
Lay your mind down for soothing, and rest� (Prepare your mind because the essense of me is about to melt onto you)

Really good write! I need a cold shower now!

[Lyrical Love]

This was a fun write, and quite easy for me. I would love to write about other subjects/events etc. but, this seems to be a natural for me.