Not Just My Flesh

...what we all want

 

I feel you not just in my flesh, but in my spirit

In my spirit you help HIM heal me

you bring...it

Not just in my flesh

but in my heart...it races, and skips spaces

its teaching me to trust love again

and believe HIM

to live the end...to again begin

Not just my flesh...oh boy

you are bringing me my stolen joy

what is deeper than not just my flesh

my nerves, my blood, my bones

that hold me         

mold me

create in me

and make me...moan

when not just my flesh can be touched

but what you do to my mind

when you cant see my beee...hind~

and when not just my flesh, you can reach

your soul can teach

not just my flesh

but protect, and cover

not as my lover

but as my soldier, warrior of light

travelin' through the dark

til you

can...

do

more to me

than just my flesh.

 

Reviews

[Joseph - Michael]

I'm going have to assume that you're talking about that you want strong sensual rather than sexuality, right? I'm pretty sure that there are many other meanings behind those lines, but hey, that's just me

On the other hand, I really enjoyed reading this piece, because it sure had given me a lot of thoughts about it, so it's all good tho...

[MaraJhozel]

I liked the message of this poem. Great poem. (:

[Shondell]

I like this poem because it shows that u have more to offer than ur body...that u want the person to love u for who u r...good job

[Miss Habit]

You have such a unique writing style, I love the way you add emphasis with color, size as well as capitals and bold it really allows for the reader to better interpret the message being delivered. Another amazing piece, you really have talent.
BRAVO

[Violet Hill]

hehe I love this poem! I rly like the format of it, it kept my attention!

The title basically is the meaning of the poem, I like that. Not Just your Flesh- much more than it.

Nicely written!

[Zyanya]

I like this poem . The way you spell behind is clever it gives it more emphasis. I particularly like this section of the poem "when you cant see my beee...hind~

and when not just my flesh, you can reach

your soul can teach

not just my flesh

but protect, and cover

not as my lover

but as my soldier, warrior of light

travelin' through the dark" Especially the part about my solidier, warrior of light traveling through the dark. One thing I might change is cant I would change it to can't. Great job I think your right that is what we all want.

[THE LOST ROSE]

Lyrical you are not afraid to put your conversation withyour heart into poetry. Excellent! More! More! More!

[Alford G. Harris]

You write with a great deal of passion... It is subliminally refreshing... Write on

[Marvin Lewis Jr.]

I admire the way you said what you wanted and at the same time testified of the benefits it would bring once you obtained it...
Your philosophy on the difference and advantages of the flesh and spirit was unique.
The way this poem moved, the way it felt, and looked was masterful!
I'm glad I read it!

[bailish]

The physical experience is not enough. You seek a deeper relationship. The message flows through your writing smoothly.

Good write!

[penloverfool]

it must be true love! i hope that most of us can view love as more than the physical factor, that love is actually more profound than we think and that we cannot really fathom its wonders, yet we can feel it!

great job...