Not Just My Flesh

...what we all want

 

I feel you not just in my flesh, but in my spirit

In my spirit you help HIM heal me

you bring...it

Not just in my flesh

but in my heart...it races, and skips spaces

its teaching me to trust love again

and believe HIM

to live the end...to again begin

Not just my flesh...oh boy

you are bringing me my stolen joy

what is deeper than not just my flesh

my nerves, my blood, my bones

that hold me         

mold me

create in me

and make me...moan

when not just my flesh can be touched

but what you do to my mind

when you cant see my beee...hind~

and when not just my flesh, you can reach

your soul can teach

not just my flesh

but protect, and cover

not as my lover

but as my soldier, warrior of light

travelin' through the dark

til you

can...

do

more to me

than just my flesh.

 

Reviews

[Joseph - Michael]

I'm going have to assume that you're talking about that you want strong sensual rather than sexuality, right? I'm pretty sure that there are many other meanings behind those lines, but hey, that's just me

On the other hand, I really enjoyed reading this piece, because it sure had given me a lot of thoughts about it, so it's all good tho...

[Jolyrose]

Finding someone who you know you can let in, tat you know has more han their own agenda in mind is the most wonderful feeling in the world. Add to that their ability to make you feel with more than just your nerve endings, more than your hormones, more than their hands and... other parts. That's what I felt from this intensely personal poem. Thanks for it, LL, it makes one aspire to more.

[Deadofnight]

The guy I had, he never asked me one time how I felt all he wanted was the flesh part and when I wont give it up he just be all up in my face angry. This is real good

[universalove]

In my life there has been to many woman . Which gave me the power of the highest of respect. Your poem made me feel that all I am looking for is above her head. mind over matter. cause everything else will fall in place. good write.

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

Awwwwwwww!!!! I felt this one! Usually I praise you for your cool, elegant style, but this is more telling and emotional. Very desperate and passionate in your appeal for the person to quench your entire being, not just your flesh. Very sweet, very smart and very vulnerable in a way that I'm not use to seeing. Great write!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Awe when you can not only stimulate someone's body but also there mind and heart it is the best kind of love... the tri-fected makes for the perfect kind of love that lasts... your words are so eloquent and passionate...

when not just my flesh can be touched
but what you do to my mind
when you cant see my beee...hind~
and when not just my flesh, you can reach
your soul can teach

that is my favorite part.

[Walkingblind]

Now I know what was hiding on your back page, you are
right this is what we all want. Yes we love when our man loves
our skin, but when he trully falls in love with our intellect, and
comes to respect how we bend the days to make way for our plans
in life, we love him more:

I feel you not just in my flesh, but in my spirit

Your opening drew me in and had me smiling everytime
you made your point clear. Your a great writer and I applaud you!

[Angel's Lady]

Not just in my flesh
but in my heart...it races, and skips spaces
its teaching me to trust love again --- love these lines...

At times, I felt this was almost religious, but maybe I'm missing the concept. I liked it, no matter what, for the simple rewarding beauty of it.
Great write.

[C.J.]

wow i like this poem you outlined in perfict places and it helped the poem out a little good job.

[JadedSparrow]

Oh my...I read this a few times, and loved it each time. Very easy to read. For me, there is a spiritual conotation to this piece. Perhaps thats b/c where I am right now in my life and my walk. I love your spin on poetry Love. I look forward to reading more of your work.

[APoetsMuse]

I like your style. Keep them coming!