theft

I kind think this one sucks, give me feedback

I once read,

that there is only one sin,

theft,

that everything evil,

lives,

within,

this one little thing we commit everyday,

that we try,

or don't try to keep far, far away,

from ourselves,

from others,

but it's here to stay.

I'd like to explain myself,

if I may,

it's hard to explain,

but in the end easy to convey,

everything you do,

or don't do,

takes something from someone,

yourself or someone else in some little way.

Author's Note

hey

Reviews

[nightshade]

another great poem. it is so meaningful. I love the flow and the rhymes it makes it a more wonderful read. I love how all of your poems that I have read have been so deep and meaningful. keep writing :)

[Lyric]

Aw I'm blushing now, thank you! :-D