A soon future.

A soon future.

A Poem by Lyric
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I wrote this when I was younger, I had to make a few changes but I hope you still like it :]

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Somewhere over the rainbow, 
and, somewhere pretty far away,
there's a patient time that's waiting for a time in which it can stay,
it truly does wish to show itself, 
it's just, you shouldn't rush into the rain to play.
There's a better time for everything,
and this time is not today.
So let us all be patient, on this still unpleasant day,
until that time shows itself we shall all be okay.

© 2015 Lyric


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Lyric
Hi! I hope you all will comment on my piece and give me feedback

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Love this, such a lyrical flow... I especially love the second half of this poem. A unique way to offer hope for a better day, and almost whimsical in the way it is worded.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Lyric

9 Years Ago

thank you so much!

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Lyric
Lyric

Newark, NJ



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Hi, I love to write and I'd just really like some feed back on all of my stuff, and I love to read other poets'/writers' work more..

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