Heavens and Hells

This poem was written at a time that wasn't the happiest.I guess that's why it's not the happiest, I hope the ending helps though. It cam from the heart and I hope you like it and will comment on it.

There are seven heavens,

and only one hell,

oh, how that makes me wonder,

how here today we have no faith,

gives me something the ponder,

the earth is filled with misery,

but for a reason all it's own,

when we have devils flying around,

but seven times the angels have flown.

Author's Note

I hope you like it, I know it's short.

Reviews

[Christian N. C.]

This is my favorite work of yours! I like that you put a lot of thought and emotion into it even though its short, to me that's what makes it great. To me this means that for every bad thing that happens in your life there are always more things to be happy about than to be sad about.

[Lyric]

thank you for your review!

[Kurai.Merodi]

i have nothing else to comment except that i really enjoyed reading this >.< thanks for sharing ^.^

[Lyric]

thank you

[TKJules]

There are 7 heavens and only 1 hell,
personally I say, just as well
my Angels are with me and loving and kind,
Devils for some of us, so hard to find!

I hope this helps you when life's feeling like Heavens & Hell's next time! You poem is heartfelt, I felt it in my heart and felt you there too. You should explore the visions you see in those moments you see clearly, let your self go and pour out your heart, I'll bet you got some good stuff in there. Think and feel like you know you can find it and say it and you can, I promise.

[Lyric]

Thank you so much