She Is Spoiled

She is so spoiled!

She yet knew

the dangers of being spoiled

the want of more

the trust of unhappiness. 

Shes yet to know

the heart of flame

the one of desire

the one of sin.

Yet she knew

that her name was spoiled

that Lynn was danger

that being spoiled is a curse.

She wanted to have it all

so others could fall

the one's desire

all of her.

She was yet to be smart

yet to be a poet

yet to be kind

she was a sinner.

How dare she enjoy lust

without others trust?

How dare Lynn want

without the want?

She was spoiled

and yet she knew

that she was a goner

with the longest want-er. 

Reviews

[Sapientiam]

I feel like this is personifying greed and the conflicts between other emotions involved, like happiness and satisfaction. The sense of wanting to rise higher than others is extremely evident through your words and people can relate to this. When we have the things we want, we yearn for more without thinking about how our character is affected. Thanks for sharing this!

[anya]

You're so welcome. I felt like I tried to hard, so this is realllt nice.

[Falcon1]

I like the first stanza it really shows where this was going and reading on was a charm to the influence of beyond knowledge Lynn was a seeker of fame and fortune and nothing could block her path yes I said NOTHING!

[AustinDF]

It was very engaging in the beginning but lost me towards the end. I also find it a bit weird how the sexuality and being spoiled are being worked together. They seem irrelevant to each other. It makes it sound a bit melodramatic.

[anya]

Thanks for the review!