Irene~

She wore a yellow flower in her hair

A song she sang in her heart

A dance in her walk

A life sprinkled with freedom of thought

 

Her eyes ever knowing

A grace always showing

Wisdom shone and set her apart

 

She wore a yellow flower in her hair

A smile that reached my heart

Her words sang into my spirit

A dance she gave me

 

A life filled with lessons she never knew she taught

Reviews

[vanishing]

Nicely done
Metaphorically rendered adoration
Vivid and naturally poetical
Thanks for sharing

[Wordcrafter]

Very sensorial, a nice dancing rhythm well matched by the words. Beautiful

This is beautiful. I like the image I got when I read this. Great description! Good flow. The poem is very good.