Fibro Curse

An ode to fibromyalgia

Pain, pain, go away

Come again another day.

The blinding fire burns my bones

My brain and eyelids made of stone.

You will not let me play today

I hope you won't live on, I pray.

You make me wish I wasn't here

You shove my throat full of fear.

I cannot stay awake for life

And no one knows my painful plight.

 

 

 

 

copywrite 2008 Lyndsay Castro

Author's Note

I am in a lot of pain today.

Reviews

[☮]

Nice write - my prayers are with you. Not an easy situation to deal with.

[Orlando Murcia]

You and I both relate, Great poem

Orlando M

[INSURGENT*76]

great title ... great poem , sorry it had to come from sore bones :(

[alyssa]

OMG!!I just got the chills when i read that!!! i can almost feel your pain... i'm sooo sorry i will pray for you to get better.....REALY REALLY GOOD WRITE....KEEP WRITING!!

[.::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.]

Awww I'm sorry about the pain!
This is an amazing ode!!

[Pink Poison]

I'm sorry that you're in pain. I have a friend with fibro and know how horrible it can be. The poem is great though...drawing good from bad; I like your style!

[The Damned]

wow

i love it

i feel the pain by reading that.

[Kitty Forzaken]

awesome write..
I've totally been there and it truly is painful...

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

You poem speaks of your pain, I wish I could help, please take care of yourself. Prayers to you. Debileah

[Reeses]

AWWW, i hope you feel better.