The Choice

The Choice

A Poem by Lyndsay Castro
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what sometimes happens in love

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She runs her fingers through her hair

She acts as if she doesn’t care
 
But deep inside dissention grows
She cannot say who’s friend or foe
 
You tell her she’s your one divine
And so do others words entwine
 
So who to follow, who to fight?
She won’t get any sleep tonight

 

copywrite 2008 Lyndsay Castro

© 2008 Lyndsay Castro


Author's Note

Lyndsay Castro
I think I was under the influence when I wrote this. I don't really remember.

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OMG I FEEL AS IF THIS WAS WROTE ABOUT ME!!!
THIS IS ME SOOO MUCH!!
I have trouble telling who I can trust so most of the time I push people away & lock them out!
Just like this guy I think I'm falling for,I can't get close to him & let myself fall because I' too afraid I'm going to get hurt!!
This poem is my fav by you so far!!
I love this!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I totally understand this. Sometimes you feel everything is a scam and no one is real. And hey.. under the influence produces the best writing :) Nice job.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

OMG I FEEL AS IF THIS WAS WROTE ABOUT ME!!!
THIS IS ME SOOO MUCH!!
I have trouble telling who I can trust so most of the time I push people away & lock them out!
Just like this guy I think I'm falling for,I can't get close to him & let myself fall because I' too afraid I'm going to get hurt!!
This poem is my fav by you so far!!
I love this!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Lyndsay Castro
Lyndsay Castro

Houston, TX



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