Six

Questions for a lover

I'll ask you a question: Have you ever loved so deeply, so easy you forget how much?

 

Have you ever hurt someone to feel better, wounded to heal?

 

Do you dream about me when you're awake?

 

Can you love me when I'm hating you?

 

Have you ever wanted to kill me when I'm being trivial?

 

I'll ask you a question: Can I love you, and not get hurt?

 

 

copywrite Lyndsay Castro 2004

Author's Note

Again, older work.

Reviews

[alyssa]

wow!! love it!!!! such powerful ... but so little words! i loved the last line " can i love you and not get hurt" so well written... it really took my breath away....again LOVE IT!!

[.::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.]

Maybe older but still amazing & beautiful!!
I have asked these questions in my mind a million times but I never let myself get close enough to him to actually ask the questions!
Great Work!! =]

[Chaos]

Very introspective and wise questions from a heart invested in love.

Interesting format.

I suggest, taking each question, pondering it and then make each question into verse. I bet it would be amazing. Give a shot!

[Lia]

This is a great piece, I love the ending. Thanks x

[EMP]

thanks for all your reviews, i must say i really like this piece of work, i love how you've made contradictive but it's still really effective! i can't wait to see more of your writing :)