Your Windows

What I saw in my lover once

What worlds, what dark wonders are found in deep eyes;

What love, what joy resides in such rocky landscapes.

 

Plains of hardened bodies, of weakened minds;

Pass by the glassy windows of the soul.

 

The shadowy corners of the only place worth knowing -

contained and expanded by deep eyes.

 

copywrite Lyndsay Castro 2004

Author's Note

I'm looking for some critics!

Reviews

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BEAUTIFUL!!!
I can't critique this because I see no flaws!!