choking words

can you hear me dying ; slowly in your arms
heaving my last breath ; choking my last words
tears stream down heavily ; not knowing where to fall
it like they're taking over ; all over my clothes
stop. listen. breathe
don't let this tower over me.
deep breaths can't even save me ; and what i have become
what you made me become
i am not ; i will not let you take over me
crying over you and your worthlessness
im dying without you though
and my tears have no clue where to fall
so they fall over everything i thought i knew.
and still crying - i find myself here
dying slowly in the arms of the one who killed me
heaving the little breaths i have left in me
choking the only words i know
i love you.

Reviews

[Butterflymom]

Your writing is intense, heartfelt, and well done! Thanks for sharing your writing.

[New]

I don't think I breathed the whole way through reading this :)- haha. This is simply b-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l! Thanks for sharing!