Zephyr

Zephyr

A Poem by LylaCrystal



In the eyes of the soul,
In the depths of the heart,
Among glimpses of feelings,
A zephyr of warmth and comfort
Soothes you from dusk 'till dawn.

© 2018 LylaCrystal


Author's Note

LylaCrystal
Long time no see! I got inspired for this short poem from a soft gentle breeze that made me smile while I was walking home after a hard day at school this week. I hope you enjoy it. Lots of hugs :)

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Howdy!

Thanks for sharing this poem! I quite enjoyed, especially paired with picture, which I believe to have complemented the feeling and tone of your poem quite well.

The poem is short, but not too short, and doesn't overstay it's welcome. Like, what you said inspired you, its' that fleeting epiphanic feeling of pleasantness and calm.

My only advice is to take a look at the last two lines - their rhythm. They feel gummed up, just a tad. Otherwise, this is very well done.

Thank you for sharing!
Kenn

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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LylaCrystal

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much for the kind words and advice. I appreciate it and I am glad that you liked my p.. read more



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An immensely comforting lyrical poem. How I wish it would sing in my ears.

Posted 4 Years Ago


LylaCrystal

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it!
light and ashes

4 Years Ago

You're welcome!
Much like that comforting breeze, this poem comes and goes too quickly, impossible to grasp, leaving one wanting for more. It can be difficult to capture abstract feelings, such as would be brought by a gentle breeze, but you've done well at it.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LylaCrystal

4 Years Ago

Thank you!
I rejoiced , could feel the soft stroke of breeze!
And a beautiful picture..,stay blessed! :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LylaCrystal

4 Years Ago

Thank you!
Howdy!

Thanks for sharing this poem! I quite enjoyed, especially paired with picture, which I believe to have complemented the feeling and tone of your poem quite well.

The poem is short, but not too short, and doesn't overstay it's welcome. Like, what you said inspired you, its' that fleeting epiphanic feeling of pleasantness and calm.

My only advice is to take a look at the last two lines - their rhythm. They feel gummed up, just a tad. Otherwise, this is very well done.

Thank you for sharing!
Kenn

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This comment has been deleted by the poster.
LylaCrystal

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much for the kind words and advice. I appreciate it and I am glad that you liked my p.. read more

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