Come with me

Lord, I know I make many promises

That I often fail to keep.

I know that You helped me all my life

And took care of me.

You know my future

And tell me it will be alright.

I can't see You, but I feel You

Through everything around me.

Through the nature that dies and revives.

Through the people You send to me.

Through everything I live.

Through who I am.

I am a human,

Caught in the vortex of life,

Surrounded by dangers,

Trying to resist.

I am a human. 

You created us from love

And we shall love each other

Like You did.

I know I try in vain 

To hide from myself,

But You know the depths 

Of our souls.

You know the hopes and dreams,

The pain and struggles,

The countless efforts.

You know we are humans.

We are fighting every day.

We are tired, we look for our path.

We are lost, we cannot continue,

But we don't give up.

We fall and get hurt,

But I feel a hand that lifts us.

I can't see You,

But I know You are with us.

I am a human.

Wounded and fordone.

Send me where you think, Lord,

But please: come with me.

Reviews

[Beccy]

Yes, we are frail, but it is that very frailty that assures his benevolence.

No-one, if they look inside their heart, can even contemplate for a moment that this beautiful gift of a planet is no more than a consequence of cosmological action. Scientists talk about the so-called 'Big Bang,' where supposedly all of the space, time, matter, and energy in the universe was created. Really? then if so, what was before; and what lies beyond our current and very limited understanding? Once there are answers to those questions, then just maybe I might retreat a little from my unshakable belief that it was a higher hand at work; but in truth, I don't for one moment believe this will ever come about.

Beccy.

[Riddhi]

I liked whole poem..But I disagree with just one point in it, the one who decides our future is not god but its us , its our deeds that decide our future..Rest of the poem was nice..Your words were powerful and the wayyou expressed yourself is worth appreciating..
Keep writing

[LylaCrystal]

When I was a child, my mom told me a story. One day, a kid asked God why did He let us have wishes if He is the one who knows our routes and it is said "Your will be done". God replied that in the great book of life, He wrote on some pages "Your will be done, too". I don't think that our steps in life are dictated, but are simply watched. We have the freedom to choose because He loves us all and always waits for us to come to Him. Thank you for your kind words and I am happy that you liked my poem

[Levi Levin]

Lots of truth to this. Well said indeed.

[LylaCrystal]

Thank you very much

[Levi Levin]

Your welcome

[Paul Bell]

Think you summed up, we're human.
Frailty is our byword.
But we try.
Well, I don't, religion always baffled me.

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Amen to that and what wonderful words- yes He knows all and all things are possible with God- mountains can be moved with faith the size of a mustard seed- amazing wondereorking God we serve🌹

[LylaCrystal]

I am happy that you liked it :)

[Dinesh Kumar]

Nicely penned
Beautiful
Really enjoyed

[LylaCrystal]

Thank you very much

[Dinesh Kumar]

Mention not