Jagged Mountain

You probably can hear it as I speak,
My soul aches and my heart is weak.
To you all I keep doing is saying yes,
To do anything different causes me stress.

I don't want to turn this into a fight,
But the goal we once shared is gone from sight.
You're blind, as I'm the only one who sees,
Staying this way is turning into a disease.

The hill has turned into a jagged mountain,
And a tsunami has erupted from the once tranquil fountain.
The paper cut is now a life threatening wound,
And our journey is now damned and doomed.

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Two people on different pages. Sad story. Relationships don't always work out. What starts out as promising, can often drop a stitch, which turns into a mighty hole. You convey your emotions well here.

Chris

[Lykos]

It happens a lot, people on the same path can be separated onto different paths. Knowing when to walk away is the thing.
Thanks for the review.

[Gee]

So hard on the heart when relationships fail. Guess I'm one of the lucky ones as have been with my wife since 1991.
Nice write

[Lykos]

It is, but it's getting easier with time.
You're definitely one of the lucky ones. That's basically like winning the life lottery right there. Well done you!!
Thank you.