the edge of good

I took this photo while walking on the deck of a cruise ship at night. The moon was full and the ocean was lapping at the hull of the ship.

suddenly swaddled in moonlight

i felt like a brave star shining through all anxieties

the glorious moon gnawed away at the darkness in my soul

damn the vicissitudes i navigate daily

the drooping dark circles under my eyes

have vanished

magically        right now        in this moment

life is teetering on the velvety edge of good

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

your words are stunning and well chosen for this enlightening scene, something about the moon’s ripple effect on the water calms our souls
this is a very heart warming piece….the moon seems to take care
of our”droopiness”……
Warmly, B

[Sami Khalil]

You poetry is not only on the edge of good, it occupies its essence.
This poem is romantic and has a good message.
Thank you for penning and sharing Lydia.

[MCS]

Brilliant image and words. We all need to teeter closer to the good.

[Lydia Shutter]

Absolutely! Thank you!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

gorgeous photo and poem...you make the most of the cruises by navigating into a different world, a peaceful world, a utopia.

j.

[Lydia Shutter]

You know me so well. Walking on an outside deck at night is magical. Stars, the moon, and the waves….it’s just wonderful for me. Thanks for the visit, Jacob. Lydi****