"yes, we were alive together
more alive than we are apart"
As someone who has just gone through a breakup, all these romantic poems break my heart over and over again. Yet somehow they make me believe in love again. Oh, what a wonderful poem, thank you.
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Thank you so much. You WILL find love again. Make sure you have your eyes open when it passes your.. read moreThank you so much. You WILL find love again. Make sure you have your eyes open when it passes your path. Lydi**
As the past tense is used in this one, I get the impression the addressee is no longer in the picture. Still, his presence is powerfully felt, as the last two lines indicate. When feelings have been as deep as those described here, one is never totally in the past.
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Yes, John, even when people are no longer together, memories and emotions remain. Thanks for the re.. read moreYes, John, even when people are no longer together, memories and emotions remain. Thanks for the review. Lydi**
togetherness is a special bond to last eternally...being alive and laughing, crying, embracing, sensing....this bond seems especially important as it brought back all the emptiness felt....and all the love that was missing...."more alive than apart".....lovely
Warmly, B
"yes, we were alive together
more alive than we are apart"
As someone who has just gone through a breakup, all these romantic poems break my heart over and over again. Yet somehow they make me believe in love again. Oh, what a wonderful poem, thank you.
Posted 2 Days Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Days Ago
Thank you so much. You WILL find love again. Make sure you have your eyes open when it passes your.. read moreThank you so much. You WILL find love again. Make sure you have your eyes open when it passes your path. Lydi**
You write romance so well Lydi. Lovely! Hugs, Julie
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Julie! Have not seen you here in so long! Hope all is well with you. Thanks for stopping by. Lyd.. read moreJulie! Have not seen you here in so long! Hope all is well with you. Thanks for stopping by. Lydi**
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My pleasure. It is always a treat to read your words!
what a beautiful tribute to the power of poetry and especially that shared between friends and/or lovers .. right here at the Cafe' ... thanks so much for sharing your stuff, Ms. Lydi!
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I appreciate your kind review, E. Thanks so much. Lydi**