"yes, we were alive together
more alive than we are apart"
As someone who has just gone through a breakup, all these romantic poems break my heart over and over again. Yet somehow they make me believe in love again. Oh, what a wonderful poem, thank you.
Posted 3 Months Ago
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3 Months Ago
Thank you so much. You WILL find love again. Make sure you have your eyes open when it passes your.. read moreThank you so much. You WILL find love again. Make sure you have your eyes open when it passes your path. Lydi**
We do need those tasty kisses dear Lydia. Keep us young in heart. These are the memories that make us smile in old age. A wonderful dance of words my dear friend. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
Posted 2 Months Ago
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1 Month Ago
Thank you John! I appreciate your review. Lydi**
1 Month Ago
I loved the poetry dear Lydia and you are welcome.
Happy anniversary(read your reply to Lorry)
31 years married myself so can fully relate to your finely laid words, and my much bitten tongue is testament to the time and effort in making a relationship work :)
Posted 2 Months Ago
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2 Months Ago
Oh yes, it does take time and effort. That is something not usually bothered with these days. Than.. read moreOh yes, it does take time and effort. That is something not usually bothered with these days. Thanks for the review, Gee. Lydi** Oh, and 31 years is not chopped liver! LOL
Don't we all hope we have such fond reminiscences Lydi?
To show that some part of the complexity of life and living was worth it, as well as oh so memorable.
Posted 2 Months Ago
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2 Months Ago
Thanks for finding this one, Lorry. Today is my 49th wedding anniversary! Love can last! Lydi**
Many congratulations Lydi. Next one is the big five oh!
Think how much life has been lived t.. read moreMany congratulations Lydi. Next one is the big five oh!
Think how much life has been lived together in that number. It Biggles the mind, as well as boggles it, when predictive text doesn't bills it up, if you know what I mean!
😃
2 Months Ago
Oh yes...thanks for the laugh. The big five oh....I hope it is possible. Not many make it to that .. read moreOh yes...thanks for the laugh. The big five oh....I hope it is possible. Not many make it to that number these days.
2 Months Ago
Very true Lydi. It would be a momunent...monulent... really big achievement indeed! 😃
Each and every line seems familiar... emotions distorted in the sad ever after. Thank Space and Time for allowing memories to etch wherever they can. You know how to say deep, dark thoughts yet have the artistry to stand proud, dear Lydi.
Truly this was a poem about no one in particular. Just playing with the words on a rainy day. Than.. read moreTruly this was a poem about no one in particular. Just playing with the words on a rainy day. Thanks so much, Emma. Lydi**
2 Months Ago
You played so very well so very well, dear Lydi - as you always have and do. Hugs and smiles com.. read moreYou played so very well so very well, dear Lydi - as you always have and do. Hugs and smiles coming your way. Em
As the past tense is used in this one, I get the impression the addressee is no longer in the picture. Still, his presence is powerfully felt, as the last two lines indicate. When feelings have been as deep as those described here, one is never totally in the past.
Posted 3 Months Ago
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3 Months Ago
Yes, John, even when people are no longer together, memories and emotions remain. Thanks for the re.. read moreYes, John, even when people are no longer together, memories and emotions remain. Thanks for the review. Lydi**
togetherness is a special bond to last eternally...being alive and laughing, crying, embracing, sensing....this bond seems especially important as it brought back all the emptiness felt....and all the love that was missing...."more alive than apart".....lovely
Warmly, B
"yes, we were alive together
more alive than we are apart"
As someone who has just gone through a breakup, all these romantic poems break my heart over and over again. Yet somehow they make me believe in love again. Oh, what a wonderful poem, thank you.
Posted 3 Months Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
3 Months Ago
Thank you so much. You WILL find love again. Make sure you have your eyes open when it passes your.. read moreThank you so much. You WILL find love again. Make sure you have your eyes open when it passes your path. Lydi**
You write romance so well Lydi. Lovely! Hugs, Julie
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3 Months Ago
Julie! Have not seen you here in so long! Hope all is well with you. Thanks for stopping by. Lyd.. read moreJulie! Have not seen you here in so long! Hope all is well with you. Thanks for stopping by. Lydi**
3 Months Ago
My pleasure. It is always a treat to read your words!