illusion

artwork by kelsey howard

i think i always knew

from the moment my blue eyes opened

on that summer morn

i knew you would be “the one” for

at least a little while

you fed me words through music

told me i was strong

        a bit self-serving, n’est pas?

we closed the sliding door to the past

allowing the sea air to be our aphrodisiac

the ocean spoke to me

perhaps a siren’s song?

to me you were an unmoored boat

i thought i could be your anchor

the seabreeze told me differently

lies became truths

truths were inconsequential

but i believed it all

and until this day

a small part of me still does

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

mmmmmmmm ... i can recall that love of my younger years that i threw myself into regardless the risk .. too easy to fool ourselves into believing lies of all kinds .. there is pain in it but for me that far back in years has made it a Cinderella story ... a shared love of two who had not sprouted enough to make flowers happen .. i enjoyed very much where your poem takes me, Lydi. thanks for sharing
E.

[Lydia Shutter]

As is usually the case, E, you understood the poem's meaning. Your line, "had not sprouted enough to make flowers happen" is brilliant....you ought to use that in a poem! Thanks so much for the review, E. Lydi***

[Einstein Noodle]

;) ... luv on ya. .. you inspire me my friend.

[nadia dmitri]

What a profound poem. The sea metaphors and the natural imagery make this such a beautiful piece. The stanza about lies and truths were really touching. You have said such loaded and delicate things in so few words. Amazing job :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much, Nadia! Lydi**

[Sami Khalil]

No illusion about your talent, your contribution to poetry.

[Lydia Shutter]

Sami, you flatter me...you are so kind.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome Lydia!

[duff]

Strength and heartache I like the emotion. The art is great. Not just a side or a distraction. Nice work.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks so much, Duff! I appreciate the review.

[Sami Khalil]

Bloom or doom , but the gloom will turn into a happy memory, I assume.
Many beautiful and touching lines, metaphors.
This reminds me of the "Waving Lady" in Savannah, GA. I enjoyed her story too.

[Lydia Shutter]

A rhyming review...love it! Thanks, Sami, I appreciate your reviews so much. Lydi**

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome Lydia

[Ted Kniffen]

Those unmoored boats will always run before the slightest breeze ... some slip away for fear of drowning ...
or being held by the drag of a sea anchor ... but each time it leaves port it takes a little bit of water into the bilge.
Eventually the realization comes that ships are not meant to be manned by a single crewman. Better to have that good First Mate to help right the boat on rough seas.

I liked this one Lydi. Nice to read you today.

[Lydia Shutter]

Ted, always good to see you on my page. Your review is a poem in and of itself! Thanks so much. Lydi**

[Robert Trakofler]

So many hearts leave indelible marks upon us, Dear O'Lydia:) What a grand reflection you shared on yours it is nice to read you again.

[Lydia Shutter]

Nice to see you again! Thanks for the review, Bunny! Lydi**

[Robert Trakofler]

I try to bounce in and read all of my friends as much as I can these days im so busy just functioning LOL

[Chris Shaw]

Wonderfully written Lydi** with great metaphors. Sometimes those unmoored boats aren’t looking for an anchor, they prefer the freedom of the seas. Some romances aren’t destined to be and that can hurt and disappoint. Your artwork is always carefully selected to match the mood you are creating. Fabulous work.

Chris

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much, Chris. I am always so pleased you notice the artwork too. Have a great day. Lydi**

[emmajoygreen]

From start to finish I felt your words and it hurt. There are times that one's world implodes, often at the very worst moment. Each of your stanzas has a relevant point, each debatable Depends on which side of the table the sun shines out of.. You really are able to share thoughts in a language that flies higher than most others but also has a heart that hurts Hugs, dear Lydi.

[Lydia Shutter]

Emma, you are so sweet. Your review means a great deal to me. Thank you. Lydi**

[emmajoygreen]

Am your friend, Lydi. :)

[John Sullivan]

We've got to be careful with who we love, Lord knows they leave that little piece of themselves with us.
Very touching piece, thanks for sharing

[Lydia Shutter]

Indeed, they do. Thanks so much, John. Have a great weekend. Lydi**