okay

when the world was too loud

and voices drowned each other out

you were always my calm

my deep breath

my true north

authentic and true

accepting my beliefs

whether you agreed or not

 

but now opinions push me

this way and that

like a high school bully

 

i go to our place

at the shoreline

the sun dances in a pool

of orange-pink-yellow

and if i squint just enough

i swear i see you waving at me

telling me today is the day

everything will be okay

 

Reviews

[Robert Haigh]

Some people do have that kind of effect on our lives, and I think it is wonderful when they do! Whether they are still in our lives or not, they remain special in our hearts and minds! A wonderful poem, Lydi**, and one which I'm sure many readers will instantly be able to identify with!

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks so much, Robert. I feel fortunate to have had someone like that in my life. Lydi**

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

I love this it resonates with me so much
I go to ocean and think of those now gone look out to horizon they are there

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks so much, Julie. There is a calming atmosphere at the shoreline! Lydi**

[Cassie]

Awww,,This is a wonderiful memory worth keeping and having forever

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you sweet Cassie. Lydi**

[Just Kim]

Oh, I love that last stanza, so wonderful,
middle stanza, full of emotions.
This is wonderful Lydia

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you once again, Kim. Lydi**

[Nima.Hope]

Being with the right person, at the right place and the right time, indeed is an expression of happiness.
I hope these for everyone, may all of us find the true peace in our hearts. Nicely penned.
Best Wishes
Nima

[Lydia Shutter]

You know it, Nima. thanks for the review. Lydi**

[Nima.Hope]

My pleasure my friend.

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful poem dear Lydia. We must find a place of okay, every day. I liked the journey and the positive ending. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Lydia Shutter]

We are all on a journey, my friend. I appreciate your kind review. Lydi**

[Coyote Poetry]

Yes we are dear Lydia and you are welcome.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Every little thing is gonna be alright, as Bob Marley sang in Three Little Birds. People can be so unkind and pushy sometimes. I suffer from too much honesty and satire in my veins with often a dose of sarcasm thrown in for good measure. Those that know me, love me in spite of myself and a friend made is one I'll keep for life. But I'm often misunderstood and in my latter years I've just grown tired of trying to explain myself to anyone. Most of my lifelong friends have passed away and I've no longer the patience required to recruit new ones. So I've settled into my shell and become the crusty curmudgeon I never thought I'd live long enough to become. But I miss those old friends sometimes, I miss their caring, understanding and unconditional love. I can only count myself blessed as to have ever known such wonderful beings to begin with. Thank you for the reminder that they are always with us. Bless, F.

[Lydia Shutter]

As we grow older, we realize what is important in life. Memories are precious. The times we shared with friends can make us smile. I appreciate your review, Fabian. Lydi**

[Kelly Scheppers]

I've been through so much lately, and the stress and emotion have hit me hard. I keep breaking down, and feel exhausted. How wonderful for me to be back among friends, taking me back to better days, that I know will soon find me once again.

[Lydia Shutter]

Wishing only the best for you, Kelly! Thank you for reviewing!

[Kim S.]

such a lovely write, I kinda like the part of
"but now opinions push me
this way and that
like a high school bully"

Awesome write

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much, Becks. Lydi**

[Kim S.]

not a problem

[Chris Shaw]

Sea sunsets are just wonderful. I really look forward to our visits to Torbay and Brixham every year. There is something so calming about the vastness of the ocean, the taste of salt on your lips, the breeze in your hair and being on your own to take in the peaceful ambience. Lovely work Lydi**
Have a good Thursday.

Chris

[Lydia Shutter]

Hi Chris. Thanks for the lovely review! Yes, walking along the shoreline is my favorite place to be. Hope you are enjoying the day as well. Lydi**