all because

a kiss of metaphor tickles my neck

like a raindrop of romance

in a flash 

the unfamiliar becomes familiar

the routine day becomes remarkable

i collect the words dancing off the pages

of you

your ginger scented syntax 

finds its way into

my “how to stay happy” manual

tossed and tumbled emotions

sway down the staircase of “what if”

eloquent thoughts erode into mere gibberish

all because of you

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

How wonderfully expressive and appreciative of the thoughts and feelings of another. The descriptions make me think of my own feelings when I read beautiful poetry or succinct passions that I wish to express but can't find in my own words. They acknowledge that someone else might say those things for us that leave us so often, mute. We place those words in our hearts and tuck them away safe in our memory to treasure, time and time again, because they let us know...we are NOT alone. Beautiful. F.

[Lydia Shutter]

I think we all share certain life experiences and we all experience similar emotions. Expressing them is the work for a poet! :) thank you, Fabian. Lydi**

[Sami Khalil]

Top notch poetry and art. The reader can't get enough. You mold romance into deep shapes and shades. The reader just has to enjoy it all...

[Lydia Shutter]

I'm so glad you enjoyed, Sami. thanks for letting me know. Lydi**

[Sami Khalil]

I did. You are welcome.

[Sami Khalil]

"i collect the words dancing off the pages

of you



your ginger scented syntax

finds its way into

my “how to stay happy” manual"

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing dance of words dear Lydia.
"i collect the words dancing off the pages
of you"
I liked the above lines. We do collect words and memories. The writer's wealth. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you, John. I hope you are well. Lydi**

[Coyote Poetry]

I am well dear Lydia and I hope you are doing well and having some fun. You are welcome.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you, John. enjoying life is what life is all about!

[keith]

well now, your words certainly express your awareness of the realities of others
the pairing of art with words works so well here
your presence of being shines thru

question ... whose paintings are these?

[Lydia Shutter]

This painting was on Pinterest and gave no indication of the artist. Sorry, I have no idea. Thanks for the visit. Lydia

[keith]

i asked as i had done a series of 30 female sculptures in the mid 80s ... here are 5
they are posted in my photos ... you are more than welcomed to step into my gallery! ha!

[Lydia Shutter]

You said they are here, but I do not see them.

[keith]

my mistake ... last comment
i did not have correct spelling
here are 5 should have been 'there are 5'
'posted in my photos'

[Chris Shaw]

How a mood can change. Lovely romantic lines which end on a high note. Uplifting poetry Lydi** and carefully selected artwork posted too. Sending warm wishes across the waves. Good to see you.

Chris

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks so much, Chris. I have not been writing much lately. I think my muse is on vacation! I appreciate your review. Lydi**

[Chris Shaw]

Snap. My muse is idle too. I am airing some of my older poems. Great to see you back on the board :)

[Lydia Shutter]

They must be roommates somewhere! LOL

[Ken Simm.]

So many romantic lines in this by the best. But I think the opening line cracks the lot for me.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks so much, Ken. I appreciate your review. Lydi**

[Einstein Noodle]

solid ... very romantic ... keeping it real poem .. love the title, killer opening line and this one "your ginger scented syntax" ... i think the brilliance is in the thread that creative writers experience .. presented in such a unique way ... the tickling of the neck will stay with me ... when inspiration does such a thing it is mwavelous indeed .. mighty fine read for me ma'am! Nice new pic too :))))))))))))))))))))))
E.

[Lydia Shutter]

thanks, E. Always appreciative of your reviews. Lydi***

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"eloquent thoughts erode into mere gibberish"

I have had that happen on first dates.
obviously, I would love this with the kiss of metaphor...
your words here dance off the page.
nicely done,
j.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks so much, Jacob. Lydi**