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artwork by guillermo marti ceballos

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              

there is a place we all seek

a slumber deep and carefree

a place where there is peace

take my hand and follow me 

we'll write our own survival guide

with illustrations bright and bold

it will become famous, i tell ya

a part of every modern household!

no timetables will be necessary

no dress code to worry about

we'll feast on carbs and calories

really just chill-out!

no alarm clocks will be ringing

in this place i want to go

we will send invitations

to everyone we know!

we'll float by the moon and stars

with determination strong

giggles will be our currency

we'll sing a happy song!

but all that will have to wait

until a time in another year

you will be there next to me

never doubt it dear!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I want to go too dear Lydia.
no alarm clocks will be ringing
in this place i want to go
we will send invitations
"to everyone we know!
we'll float by the moon and stars
with determination strong
giggles will be our currency
we'll sing a happy song!"
I loved the above lines. We need happy songs. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Lydia Shutter]

I always try to sing happy songs....to fool myself if nothing else! Thanks once again, John. Merry Christmas. Lydi**

[Coyote Poetry]

Me too dear Lydia and you are welcome my dear friend.

[Chris Shaw]

What an idyllic place, where there are no timetables, no dress code and just an nvitation to chill out. That is the kind of dream I like. Conveyed so well Lydi** and your artwork blends beautifully with your words. Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours. Have a lovely time.

Chris

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much, Chris. Happy Thanksgiving to you and your family as well. Lydi**

[Tom]

A delightful dreamscape, penned to perfection through idyllic imagery and metaphor, yes indeed my friend, and don't we all long for that sacred swansong but in the meantime, reality bites and chills like the cold north wind !

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much, Tom. Lydi**

[Patricia]

oh this is wonderful and fun and got me excited to read on, I wanted it to keep going like an all night party! Great writing!

[Lydia Shutter]

So glad you enjoyed. Thanks for telling me! Lydi**

[Kerra]

no timetables will be necessary
no dress code to worry about
we'll feast on carbs and calories
really just chill-out!

How I love this part, I love munching out on tacos and fries. This is so creative and well written. Kinda uplifting as well. Awesome write

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks, Kerra. I appreciate the review. LydI**

[Kerra]

not a problem

[Patricia Wedel]

As an "understudy" to your poetry... I find a solace where
dreams lie and stillness sighs. The Autumn leaves scurry
on their way and the wind sings on Butterfly wings.
Wishing you the Joy of Chanukah. gently, Pat

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you for the review and for the good wishes, Pat. I hope you and Roger have a happy Thanksgiving. Lydi**

[Cherrie]

What a delightful journey for us to take.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks, Cherrie! Lydi*

[Einstein Noodle]

timely positive messaging Lydi! I love it!! your poem has lifted me morning to thoughts of hope and faith .. thank you for that reaching hand and warm uplifting invitation to join you .. well done .. i immersed myself in this hopeful and carefree ride ... yes .. another year ... i do believe, i do believe, i do believe. :))))))))))))))))
E.

[Lydia Shutter]

I think I can, I think I can! :) Thanks so much, E. Always appreciate your reviews. Lydi**

[Einstein Noodle]

very sensuous pic too! :))))))))))))))))))))))) subtle and modern/classy

[barleygirl]

This kinda sounds like my current retirement! *wink! wink!* Love the playfulness & imagination thru-out! Humans are so silly about restricting ourselves at every turn! (((HUGS)))

[Lydia Shutter]

Yes, we are. Thanks for the lovely review, Margie...happy you are enjoying retirement. Lydi**

[Ken Simm.]

I can only agree and wish for the same things. Though if I could express it as well? Now that is debateable.

[Lydia Shutter]

I am sure you could easily do it, Ken. Thanks for the review. Lydi**