long ago

long ago

you were the hope that kept me believing

like the last ripple of a mighty wave

the buoyant "just maybe"

and the spark that kept my flame alive

maybe it's strange

but on this november day

the warm sand reminded me

and when a white-foamed wave kissed my toes

i smiled....pretending it was you

Reviews

[emmajoy]

What a gently passionate setting you've contrived, Lydi, tis absolutely sighhhhh-worthy. Not surprisingly, it seems to be a delightful and infinite memory for you. Would you believe I crinkled my toes when i read your penultimate line! There can sometimes be such a special and precious feel about 'just maybe'.

[Lydia Shutter]

I do believe it, Emma...you truly allow yourself to wander between the lines! Thank you so much for your sweet review, Emma. I appreciate it. There is always a "just maybe" in life...remember that. Lydi**

[emmajoy]

I try to remember, but sometimes, Lydi, my memory lets me down! Just read your poem again, tis lovely.

[Pete]

you've surely brought sand, sea and sentimentality together. never know when or where remembrances will come upon us - this one coming in a wave. thanks for the reminder from 'long ago' ... :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks very much, Pete. The sand and sea always remind me of the good times.

[Ken Simm.]

Some memories are lovely things and so is this poetry.

[Lydia Shutter]

thanks, Ken. Lydi**

[Sami Khalil]

Dreamy, memory-filled reminding of the lovely past with person and events. There is a longing in your mind and wandering in your soul. Lovely to read and enjoy. Soothing to the feelings...

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much, Sami. Lydi**

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome dear poet.

[Ardra]

Mmmm the just maybe... and pretending.... as always beautiful....
Ah some remain as memory and leave a speck of smile on our face when we recall the memories... :)) thank you for sharing this beauty with us

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks so much, Ardra. Lydi**

[Einstein Noodle]

thanks for sharing this beautiful moment with us Lydia .. the mood enticed, brought me to read it several times ;) i love this line especially .. "the buoyant "just maybe"" ..i think it is packed with many layers .. and i think your closing is Divine .. it smacks of maturity, forgiveness, fortitude and peace ... at peace with something that once was wonderful, ended (for whatever reason),was painful then resolved and now able to remember all the good parts ... i know it is the warm sand that is the trigger but the mention of November touches my own memories ..i (honest) just sent an e-mail to my 4 children because once again when October comes and goes I come to realize the reason I am so thoughtful of their Mother .. she died many years ago in October and we have talked about how without consciously knowing ... we all start to feel a little sad .. and our thoughts turn to her ... i relate big time to your poem ... no thought at all about moving, leaving out or changing a thing ... nice one says i! so glad i stopped this morning ;)
E.

[Lydia Shutter]

I, too, am happy you stopped by to read this one, E. T'is true, certain months of the year bring certain memories back and they are so vivid, they almost feel alive. Thank you for sharing your emotions here and for the lovely review. Have a wonderful day, E. Lydi**

[Einstein Noodle]

back at ya Lydi! :)

[Patricia Wedel]

I can imagine being on the beach at dusk when the Tide is enforce and I see at a distance a Lighthouse... I feel the hope and memory of a wave 🌊 that flows over my soul and into my heart. Amen... Pat

[Lydia Shutter]

So glad you enjoyed this one, Pat. Thank you for the lovely review. Lydi**

[Papaya]

beautiful memories of someone special brought to life by the longing felt.
beautifully written.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much, Ana. The beach is always an inspiration for me. Lydi**

[Papaya]

You're welcome Lydi :)

[A hare off]

Heart touching, the longing is answered by the incoming tide. Exquisitely beautiful.

[Lydia Shutter]

I appreciate your review. Thanks so much. Lydi**