Lydia, a tender and sincere poem. I read this one several times, and though it certainly applies to a lifelong or longtime love, so many verses can also apply to self. I reflected on times when I talked myself through a scary or troubled time, and I came out on the other side. So comforting when we know others know us so well. Enjoyable read, as always.
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6 Years Ago
Thank you very much, Robert. Those who can love themselves like this are very fortunate folks. read moreThank you very much, Robert. Those who can love themselves like this are very fortunate folks.
I liked your interpretation. Lydi**
6 Years Ago
Amazing ! I love your words , they're amazing! , well done (:
I love the line about the favorite oldies song. If people knew their partners as well as old lyrics, this world would be an awesome place. Ok its already an awesome place. You know what i mean. Great poem. CD
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6 Years Ago
Thanks so much, CD. Today is my hubby and my 43rd wedding anniversary....yea, it's an awesome place.. read moreThanks so much, CD. Today is my hubby and my 43rd wedding anniversary....yea, it's an awesome place. :) Lydi**
Sweet and wonderful use of words dear friend.
"i know you
every inch of you
like i know every word to my favorite oldies song
in pockets of night"
I do like the above lines. They are what love should be. Song and memory. Thank you Lydia for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
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6 Years Ago
Your poetry so often mentions music and dance...it is the stuff of romance. Thank you, my friend. .. read moreYour poetry so often mentions music and dance...it is the stuff of romance. Thank you, my friend. Lydi**
“Our bodies sing a silent tune...” and the lovers here are so attuned to each other. Tender, musical, golden, glorious words of love sung heart to heart. “In pockets of night..and in the vastness of day..” - gorgeous imagery and lyrical expression. I hear the musicality of this as a song- would love to hear it orchestrated. Absolutely beautiful poem Lydi!
Thank you so much, Annette. Way back when...in college...some of my words were put to music by a lo.. read moreThank you so much, Annette. Way back when...in college...some of my words were put to music by a local band. Those were the days! :) LydI**
6 Years Ago
Aaah, I recognized a fellow songwriter! Hope you have a great and tuneful day.:))
I meant this comment for this poem, "Never doubt it". Reminds me a bit of Silver threads and Golden needles... We can mend our lovers heart, because we know the other so well. A soft and melodic poem that caresses the heart. truly, Pat
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6 Years Ago
I had a feeling you meant it for this one, but didn't want to say anything! :) Thank you once agai.. read moreI had a feeling you meant it for this one, but didn't want to say anything! :) Thank you once again, sweet Pat. Lydi**
I love the ending - Never Doubt It, No matter what lies Ahead.
It's funny how all Doubts are created by our Own Minds - yet we believe them to be True, right?
I've always wanted to know how to embed a picture the way you did, and not just have it be that little ICON in front of the Title - Would you share with me how you did that? Be nice if the Cafe had HELP. Lovely Lydia, I'm glad you're Here, and always Remember - To BE HERE NOW, as much as we Can - Be Here Now.
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6 Years Ago
I'll be happy to tell you how to embed the photo. Save the photo on your computer first. Then when.. read moreI'll be happy to tell you how to embed the photo. Save the photo on your computer first. Then when you are posting your poem, you will see a little green square at the top of the area where you type the copy of the poem. Click on that. A box will open up and you upload the photo from your computer that way. I appreciate your review very much. If you need further assistance, let me know. Lydi**