You can turn any moment, into a moment of gracefulness and gratitude, the mystical feelings of love, those feelings that raise our senses, burst our hesrts, flowing our ink... how gorgeously You've painted one of these moments, how sensitively and yearningly You've said it all, how Your feelings come into free words with no rules, just written, as Your heart whispers them to You. another splendid piece of beauty, Thank You*
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
Thank you so much, Light. Your review made my morning brighter. Lydi**
Love the image! Exhale and be the moment...see, feel, remember...you are there. A delicate whisper of a poem with intricate form, repetition and lovely flowand cadence. Imagery mesmerizes-“palm fronds breathe a sigh of relief” and so do we as we read your lyrical words..”remembering the poetry of your face”- brilliant. Brava my friend!
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6 Years Ago
Thanks so much, Annette. Love the new photo of you! Lydi**
6 Years Ago
You’re so welcome Lydi! Blad you like the pic of “Grandma at the Pool”- that’s what my grand.. read moreYou’re so welcome Lydi! Blad you like the pic of “Grandma at the Pool”- that’s what my grandboys said- ha!:))
We are lucky we can be "Grandmas at the pool!" The weather has been hotter than usual this winter!
6 Years Ago
We absolutely are Lydi. My kids & grandboys just flew back to NY yesterday morning to 3 inches of sn.. read moreWe absolutely are Lydi. My kids & grandboys just flew back to NY yesterday morning to 3 inches of snow. I don’t miss that at all!:)
I drew in my breath at the first line and didn't exhale fully till the last line, the way you marvelously build and culminate a thought. You created a poetic master piece again, so effortlessly and yet so elegantly.
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6 Years Ago
Divya, you are so kind. Thank you very much! Lydi**
Hi Lydia, This was a colorful piece! It sounds to me that your day dreaming out the window had plenty of rhyme and reason. I enjoyed every word I read! However, in this piece and some of your other pieces you're a bit light on punctuation. Poetry needs it too. I'm simply passing that on to you from an old friend writer of mine that told me the same. LOL! Best wishes I love your style!
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6 Years Ago
Thank you, John....and while I appreciate your suggestion, you will not see punctuation in my poetry.. read moreThank you, John....and while I appreciate your suggestion, you will not see punctuation in my poetry. You will rarely see capital letters. It is my style. I appreciate your review. Lydi**
6 Years Ago
lol I feel the same way Hahaha only I'm a big chicken!
see no punc lol
You have a knack for marrying just the right illustration with the delivery of your words. I adore the black and white photography, and the "see-saw of raindrops" that offer up an indelible image. Oh, and THOSE lips...utterly intoxicating!
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6 Years Ago
Kelly, you always choose the right artwork yourself. We have that in common. Thanks so much for th.. read moreKelly, you always choose the right artwork yourself. We have that in common. Thanks so much for the review. Lydi**
I love how this is short and sweet (and without rhyme or reason) but still gets the job done in an efficient way (creating a visual for the reader and telling a story). I love it but I love rhyme as well lol
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6 Years Ago
Thanks so much for your review...there is a place for rhyme, no doubt. Lydi**
Wording, flow, word choices, and just over all feel of this poem are all a big hit. This is a great piece, and one that I think will be read for quite a long time. I know that it's pieces like this that remind me why it's so rewarding to be doing this. Great job.
-Richard
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6 Years Ago
Richard, thank you so much for this lovely review! Lydi**