pura poesia

friday night is here!

artwork by helene beland

i took the undulating plunge

dancing in your sunlight

swooning in your moonlight

nibbling on the stars tumbling from your sky

my cohort

my co-conspirator

feeling your hopeful breath on my neck

needing that flesh on flesh

wanting to be just that little bit evil

deliciously diabolical

nothing prosaic about it,  mi amante

what it is, quite simply, is pura poesia

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Overall, this feels breathless & impatient, like the narrator is eager to get down to business! *wink! wink!* Your word choices are delightful, being both unusual & exact: undulating, nibbling, tumbling, deliciously diabolical . . . so much fun & action & borderline outlandishness makes this feel like wild partytime fun! Great title, too!

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much, Margie. Yea, that's me, a wild woman....in bed by 9:30! LOL Lydi**

[Tom]

Panache and passion in pure poetic form, it doesn't get any better than this, beautifully scribed Lydia with endearing style!

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much, Tom. Lydi**

[Paul Bell]

If this is build up to your Friday night, i'm in.
Evil and diabolical, that is pura poesia.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks very much, Paul. Lydi**

[Desert Knave]

" ... nibbling on the stars tumbling from your sky ". Love the imagery that your poetry is always loaded with. So very glad I peeked in today as I was rewarded with another great Friday treat. Keep on penning. ~Jim

[Lydia Shutter]

Hello there, Jim! Thanks so much for the wonderful review. Lydi**

[Alfred Kukitz]

Here I am in love again, a rapture of words seeing me through the numb of life.

regards,
al

[Lydia Shutter]

Al, you are such a romantic! Thank you very much, my friend. Lydi**

[emmajoy]

If anyone could find another dimension about raising love to a higher place, tis you, Lydi. Pura poesia never better penned.

(Methinks i must cruise, seems beautiful words fly longside!)

[Lydia Shutter]

Indeed the inspiration is incredible while asea, Emma. Thank you for this wonderful review and for being concerned whilst I was away. Lydi**

[Kelly Scheppers]

What is was - was pure pleasure, in overwhelming portions!

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks so much, Kelly. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

very sensual piece, missed your Friday nighters---

i remember feeling some kind of passion like this...long time ago. :)))

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you, Jacob.....In poetry all things are possible. Lydi**

[Ken Simm.]

As you indeed say there is nothing at all prosaic about this lovely sensuous write. A gem Lydi.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much, Ken. Lydi**

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Indeed the return provides a sensual yet elegant write Lydi. A very ethereal and timeless piece or romantic poetry.

[Lydia Shutter]

Wrote this one while on a cruise.....the swaying of the ship really inspires me. Thank you so much, John. Lydi**

[John Alexander McFadyen]

The sway is definitely an inspiration and I hope you enjoyed the cruise Lydi.