the night undressed me

artwork by harry weisburd

i remember being barefoot ‘neath the stars

then the night undressed me

at least that is what i told myself afterwards

 

since there was no other logical explanation

i was wrapped in the lace of sizzling urges

a raiment of intense desire encased my world

my very essence now controlled by passion’s dance

 

ah, the surrealistic charisma of the night

the magic of arousal held my breath

i thirsted for your kiss- your touch

you were the object of my lust

providing a bacchanalia worthy of dionysus

willingly i stepped off the cliff’s edge

falling into a fantasy

 

truly that is how it happened

when the night undressed me

and for a few glorious moments

concupiscence ruled my world

 

Reviews

[redzone]

how did I miss this erotically delightful poem Lydi... I love it when the night rules us thusly, touching us and then watching the fall... such wondrous joy it is to be so undressed and ruled... but of course we must blame it on something... that darn night baring us to all those eyes who are just jealous of that surreal magic...

you know Lydi, I love your fantasy, it is always just so damn "nice" and shiverlicious giving me goosebumps...

redzone

[Lydia Shutter]

"Shiverlicious!" Love that word!!! Of course it can't be MY fault...has to be the night....or perhaps some evil dark force. Not quite sure. :) Thanks for the "nice" review, my friend. Lydi**

[Cassie]

This is extremely beautiful, breath taking. You always have good choice of words and you use them so well.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much, Cassie. Lydi**

[Papaya]

This is a really daring piece. Jump. Always jump.
You only live once. Exquisite piece Lydi. Romantic, sensual... Linguistic art at its best.

[Lydia Shutter]

thanks very much, Ana. Lydi**

[Hebe]

This just left me breathless... you write with such passion, absolutely stunning!
.....willingly i stepped off the cliff’s edge
falling into a fantasy
You created an amazing journey...

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much, Hebe. Lydi**

[Troy Henson]

The language of love speaks loud and clear, Lydia with this beautiful piece.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks so much, Troy. Lydi**

[EcstaticEuphoria]

So great and so refreshing!

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks, Rosalee. Lydi**

[Patricia Wedel]

"Wrapped in the lace of sizzling urges" ... "my very essence now controlled by passion's dance". The world is not made of breathless moments, but "moments that take your breath away". Be still my heart. truly, Pat

[Lydia Shutter]

Awww, Pat....thank you so much. Your reviews are just wonderful. Lydi**

[MsJewel]

It is always a joy to read your poetry Lydi. This one absolutely sizzles. Love, love, love it! :) Julie

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks, Julie. Have a great evening. Lydi**

[Anahat]

Woahh..how beautiful..
Cheers!

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you, Anahat. I appreciate your visit. Lydi**

[Lyn Anderson]

I love stopping in. Your poetry dressed up in romance, and undressed just enough to paint a very sensual picture.

[Lydia Shutter]

Lyn, thank you for stopping in...you are welcome anytime! :) Lydi**