Raconteur

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he’s a raconteur par excellence

his lips tell stories

gathered in passion’s palace

yarns spun with elegance

decorated with the lust of a virtuoso

then delivered with proficient timing

upon my waiting lips

 

Reviews

[Papaya]

a man who tells lovely stories is hard to resist, particularly if he sings them and if they are love stories in which you are the star and he is your leading man. that song, delivered from mouth to lips, in a sweet kiss. sigh... :) I could sigh all day reading and imagining all sorts of lovely things here... I love this poem Lydi. It's gorgeous.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much, Ana......I am a romantic and always will be. Lydi**

[Papaya]

Me too. :) Big time.

[Sean M. Addams]

very lyrical and sensual with great flow . overall very beautifully written ... great job on this

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you, Sean. Lydi**

[redzone]

a kiss may be just a kiss to some, but then a kiss such as the one here is why toes curl, universes are born and hearts melt... and I want many such kisses... ah, it's why fantasy exists to grant barren lips such pleasure... your poetry is "a raconteur par excellence" and very "nice"... Lydi, besides your name is "It's Friday" even though such poetry is needed everyday... ;0)

redzone

[Lydia Shutter]

Indeed, every day is ripe for Friday night poetry. I agree. Fantasy, sensual, romantic....that is the genre I most enjoy writing and it seems most enjoy reading. Thank you so much for your "nice" review, Curt. Lydi**

[Lyn Anderson]

proficient timing never sounded so sexy.:)

[Lydia Shutter]

:) Thanks so much, KL. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

mmmm superbly sensual satisfaction comes from the pen of this poet...wonderfully orchestrated with your usual deft touch for sexy writes.

j.

[Lydia Shutter]

Still my favorite genre, Jacob. Thank you so much. Lydi**

[Alfred Kukitz]

Whoa! Whoa! There are times when wow isn't enough!

Regards,
Al

[Lydia Shutter]

Al, you flatter me....and I love it! :) Thank you so much. Lydi**

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Lydi, you have described a kiss perfectly... an art of passion.
truly, Pat

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks so much, dear Pat. Lydi**

[emmajoy]

An absolutely beautiful brevity, Lydi! You're a magician with words, truly are: here you've laid emotions in brief but sumptuous elegance. ' .. decorated with the lust of a virtuoso.. then delivered.... '

You really can convert a sip into a magnum!

[Lydia Shutter]

Nah, it's all smoke and mirrors, Emma! :) Thanks so much. Lydi**

[emmajoy]

Would be rude to argue.. but then, would I evah!

[Lydia Shutter]

Laughing here....you are a pip, my friend.

[Another Relic]

Being I've read your poems before, I can say you are a sexy writer and this is only more proof of that. You choose each word carefully and use them in a style that would resemble a lover and her mate on a romantic night.

[Lydia Shutter]

Autumn, have to say I don't remember you, but I do thank you for recognizing my style and for the review. Lydi**