Raconteur

painting by chrisartpainting of etsy.com

he’s a raconteur par excellence

his lips tell stories

gathered in passion’s palace

yarns spun with elegance

decorated with the lust of a virtuoso

then delivered with proficient timing

upon my waiting lips

 

Reviews

[Papaya]

a man who tells lovely stories is hard to resist, particularly if he sings them and if they are love stories in which you are the star and he is your leading man. that song, delivered from mouth to lips, in a sweet kiss. sigh... :) I could sigh all day reading and imagining all sorts of lovely things here... I love this poem Lydi. It's gorgeous.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much, Ana......I am a romantic and always will be. Lydi**

[Papaya]

Me too. :) Big time.

[Valentine]

I had to chuckle reading this gem, I think we all knew one like that in our lifetimes. Valentine

[Tom]

O' to be that man ??

A quite blissful anecdote, penned to poetic perfection. Enchanting as ever Lydia !

[Lydia Shutter]

Tom, you are always so kind. Like your new photo! Thank you. Lydi**

[Tom]

Bout time I showed my mug lol...

[Lydia Shutter]

:) I knew you were not one of the pups!

[Bala Gorthi]

Such sweet write. You can craft anything with such a perfection. You are the real virtuoso of poetry.
Thank you for this romantic write.

[Lydia Shutter]

wow, Bala....that is quite the review!! Thank you so much. Lydi**

[write2soothe]

I enjoyed reading this. Short and sweet and full of romance a depth. Someone comes to mind as I read this. I loved reading this!

[Lydia Shutter]

Glad you could relate. Thanks for the review. Lydi**

[J.M. Wise]

Gorgeous imagery. Must have been some kisser! You show that it doesn't take quantity, but quality to express yourself.

[Lydia Shutter]

A college professor once told my class, "Keep it pithy, people....if you want to get published." Never forgot that advice. Thanks, J.M. Lydi**

[MOON]

An enticing write, succinct

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks so much. Lydi*

[Lorry]

Well, what can I say? The picture, the words and impeccable timing of you, the virtuoso, is perfect. This is definitely a melt in the mouth piece, if there were such a thing. And none of your low calorie, half as good as full fat stuff either. This would be made with the finest ingredients and have about six thousand calories per serving. Delicious :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Smiling here....love this review, Nemo. Thank you so much. Lydi**

[Lorry]

You are most welcome :)

[Ken Simm.]

The telling of confidence in confident lines. This is virtuoso writng with just the right amount of wit..

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much, Ken. I appreciate you. Lydi**

[1VJ]

Sounds like a poetically proficient lover. A little luscious shiver of a poem.

[Lydia Shutter]

"Luscious shiver"....I like that. Thanks so much, Paloma. Lydi**