cut through

photography by ilya rashap

invisible fence posts define our boundaries

my lips quiver as i tread precariously near the precipice

your arm brushes mine

i see your eyes check my reaction

my thoughts weave through yours

my fingers yearn to touch you right

there

my tongue traces the silvered mouth of the soda can

knowing only you will quench my thirst

boundaries be damned

i cut through the fence

Reviews

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Now isn't this an erotic piece! Phew!!

And here my first impression was that you were writing about a sugar lust!
This is a very alluring piece of writing. Hidden thoughts, careful side glances, sensual urges to take the leap....ideas and feelings that anyone with a secret admiration for someone could relate to completely. And the devouring of the soda just illuminates the idea.

I don't think i can look at a can of coke the same way again! :)
Very well written!

[Lydia Shutter]

Smiling here. Great review. Thank you so much. Lydi**

[WittyWonka]

Just enough left to the imagination to leave us playing the scenarios in our minds. There is nothing more invigorating than reckless abandonment of boundaries. I like your use of the spatial placement of 'there' and the internal go-ahead:)

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks so much for the review. Lydi**

[Jamestown]

A little spicy:)
I enjoyed reading this,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Lydia Shutter]

Just a tad, James! :) Thanks so much. Lydi**