the last word

a poem i wrote back in 2006 that is still relevant now.

courtesy of carolcgood.com

The last word....I have heard
is what some folks desire
For it they’ll fight...with all their might
filled with brimstone and much fire

But far more smart....tis an ancient art
to let it peacefully ride
To simply ignore....avoid the war
till unfriendly sparks subside

Yes, last, not first...truly is the worst
contrary to popular belief
Seal your lips....come to grips
to achieve the greatest relief.

© 2006 Lydia Shutter

Reviews

[Sanober]

Only you could have delivered a sensible message in such a witty and elegant way. yes, this is absolutely relevant, even now, and until humans walk the earth. ah, if only people knew the true value of shutting up. lol. you have the wisdom of the sages, and the skill of all poets combined. Love this!

[Lydia Shutter]

The wisdom of the sages? Only because I am THAT old! LOL Thanks so much, Sanober...you probably read this the first time around too. Lydi**

[Sanober]

LoL, well I'm sure you've had this wisdom since you were a young woman! :)

[Lydia Shutter]

You are a sweetie. Thanks, Sanober. Lydi**

[1VJ]

Mind if I paste this on my mirror, guilty as charged! Astute observation in your poetic discernment which many, including me, should heed.

[Lydia Shutter]

It would be an honor if you did that, Paloma! thank you so much. Lydi**

[1VJ]

I wasn't kidding, pleasure was mine.

[Bala Gorthi]

This is my first read of your poetry....
I am struck by the poetic excellence of your write.
Your poem is a much needed word for the whole world.
The message is relevant even today and also universal in relevance.
I like the whole of second stanza very much.
Thanks for sharing this gem of yours....

[Lydia Shutter]

Bala, I appreciate your review. I hope you will read more of my words. Lydi**

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Yes Lydi** your worlds are still very much relevant and meaningful though it was craved way back in 2006. Nice poem.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks again. Always appreciate your reviews. Lydi**

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Welcome & pleasure reading your poems Lydi**

[Valentine]

Great write and so true, more leaders across the world should do this, or even those now running for office. Valentine

[Lydia Shutter]

You know it, Kathie! Thanks for the review. Lydi**

[Gee]

This will never not be relevant. Clever,very, rhymed really well.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks so much, Gee. Lydi**

[Gee]

My pleasure

[Lyn Anderson]

This is so true. But I think it is a lesson few people learn. I think I have this down with most people, although I do admit to losing my cool on occasion.

[Lydia Shutter]

We are all human! Thanks, KL! Lydi**

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Sometimes silence is more powerful a statement then any words we can say.
A very sound message in this great poem.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks so much. Lydi**

[Carolynn]

This is timeless and such an important message. Why do so many people think they "need" the last word? I whole heartedly believe the best thing to do is "To simply ignore....avoid the war till unfriendly sparks subside" as you state here - great poem Lydia :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much, Carolynn. Lydi**

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

Wow! Lydia, this poem is superb with words construction. I agree with Coyote. Those lines are very good to be memorized. Well articulated.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks so much, Onyia. Lydi**

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chukwuebuka Benson]

You're welcome.