inaudible hum

poetry saves the day

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confronting seditious stress

(forcing it to have an out of my body experience)

my tongue traces the shores of imagination

its only barrier the softly contoured perimeters of my mind

burgeoning images dangle before my eyes

            expanding

                        curving

                                    falling into one another

elliptical filaments of silk ‘neath a sensual rainstorm

slowly logic loses its grip

i breathe in the gentle perfume of pure poetry

insurgent stress runs off to a faraway realm

then turns to watch as i glide

on a nearly inaudible hum of passion

kissing my naked soul

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Gentle, beautiful and hopeful poetry dear Lydia.
"i breathe in the gentle perfume of pure poetry
insurgent stress runs off to a faraway realm
then turns to watch as i glide
on a nearly inaudible hum of passion
kissing my naked soul"
The above lines. Amazing. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Lydia Shutter]

Poetry relieves stress whether reading or writing it! Thank you so much, John. Happy Thanksgiving to you! Lydi**

[Coyote Poetry]

Happy Thanksgiving Lydia and you are welcome.

[Ruth]

This really shows the passion of words that run through the Poet's veins :) Stunning Lydi...poetry is such a universal healer...I so enjoyed this :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much, Poppy. Lydi**

[WittyWonka]

I was drawn by your oxymoron-ic title, only to discover the rest is quite sensual. I love your way with words.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much for the review. Lydi**

[WittyWonka]

It was my pleasure, Lydi!

[.]

I like this very much.....

A very sensual piece of writing......it glides over the tongue very easily. And there is nothing better at relieving stress as the words that flow through the tip of the quill.

And if pure poetry is perfume....hmm....does it come as cologne for men?:)
Very lovely writing.

[Lydia Shutter]

I like to dab a little behind my ears every day! LOL Thanks so much, Doodley. Lydi**

[1VJ]

Marvelous 'my tongue traces the shores of imagination' too many great lines to choose from actually, & 'perfume of pure poetry', love the finish too. Hardly faint, coming through loud and clear!

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks very much, Paloma. Lydi**

[Patricia Wedel]

Passion is an out of body experience... when
stars collide in a far off galaxy of a kaleidoscope
of colors and bursts of excitement. truly, Pat

[Lydia Shutter]

What an imagery packed review this is, Pat. thank you so much. Lydi**

[Alfred Kukitz]

Wow!

Lydia, nothing short of remarkable, these words catapult into my eyes, ring the doorbell of my soul, here and now is where I grab every morsel of your being, your soul and dance to infinity's goal.

Regards,
Al

[Lydia Shutter]

Your review is a poem itself! "the doorbell of my soul" WOW! Thanks so much, Al. Lydi**

[Alfred Kukitz]

I have fallen in love with you and your poetry. What a joy!

[Lydia Shutter]

Al, you are a sweetheart....sending you smiles and a hug.

[Shabeeh Haider]

Awesome. A poet at her best. Your words mesmerize the reader and he enters another realm.
This poem is really breathtakingly beautiful.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you, Shabeeh. Enjoy the weekend. Lydi**

[Bacchus]

i was in a funk...
until i read this.
thanks lydia!
my logic need to lose it's grip
and get naked again.

[Lydia Shutter]

:) go for it! Thanks, Bacchus. Lydi**

[Sami Khalil]

You are expanding the universe with poetry and passion. You take us on the journey of the self and faraway realms. You are inspiring...:)..............

[Lydia Shutter]

What a lovely thing to say, Sami. Thank you. Lydi**

[Sami Khalil]

Muchly welcome....:)))))