Have You?

artwork courtesy of desktopnexus

Have you felt the weight of a falling leaf
as it drifts through the wind without a care?

Have dandelions morphed to roses in your gaze

as the wind’s footsteps quicken?

Have you ever been lost
in the silence of peaceful meditation?

Have you given yourself the freedom to change

as you moved obstacles from your path?

Then I promise you this….
unrestrained by the cruelty of time
someday we’ll meet upon a distant star

Reviews

[Sanober]

This is so soothing to read! The simple beauty of it makes me smile. sometimes all it takes is a nice and deep contemplation to be in a better mood. suddenly everything is new. this poem reads just like a dream with soft angelic words. Beautiful my friend!

[Lydia Shutter]

Sanober, you have made my day (and that says a lot on this very rainy day!) Thank you so much. Lydi**

[Writeforlovely]

I enjoyed this. I love the picture you included with this piece. Great poem! :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much. Lydi**

[Miss Sharon]

(someday we’ll meet upon a distant star) And it will be marvelous! I love this write Lydi. The beauty of your soul has left its imprint within these words. ~Sharon

[Lydia Shutter]

You are so kind, my friend. Thank you very much. Lydi**

[Miss Sharon]

Always my pleasure Lydi! ~Sharon

[Valentine]

This is calming and a very nice read. Valentine

[Lydia Shutter]

I always appreciate your reviews. Lydi**

[Alfred Kukitz]

Lydia you continue to amaze and astound me with poetic brilliance. I love seeing you with a new poem at the cafe. Your one of my favorites baby!

Regards,
Al

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much, Al. Always happy to see you on my page. Lydi**

[Ananya]

Beautiful words and smooth flow. Simple, deep, truthful.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you, Ananya. Lydi**

[Pryde Foltz]

There runs beautiful truth in this one, Lydia. Sublime penning:)

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks so much, Pryde. Lydi**

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is such a wonderful and heart touching poem my lady Lydi.Truly lovely to read your sweet words after all this time :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Vidya, thank you so much for finding me! Lydi**

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are very welcome.It was my pleasure to read your lovely work once more :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

I don't have words to describe the beauty of your beautiful thoughts. Specially the last two lines. Only a true lover can think and write such a beautiful poem....Hats off to you my dear friend :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much. Lydi**

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Most welcome :)

[Terpsichore]

Those have not felt such are numbered in my view among the unlucky. I adore such poetical imagination; and how wonderful it is to be able to articulate such joyous thoughts.

T

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much, Terpsichore. Lydi**